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Poets and Poems: Peter Murphy and “You, Too, Were Once on Fire”

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Peter Murphy writes poems candidly, from experience.

About the time my mother turned 75, she said something to me that she’d been apparently been saving up. “You know,” she said, “I’ve reached an age when I can say what I think, and I don’t have to worry about what happens because of it.” This was something she learned from her own mother, who’d made some kind of similar announcement at about the same age. Except my grandmother had been doing exactly that long before she announced it. So had my mother.

I remembered those statements as I read deeper into You, Too, Were Once on Fire: Poems by Peter Murphy. Ad those thoughts hit me as I read “Stairs to All Levels,” a poem about Frank O’Hara and New York City and the Twin Towers and 9?11, and you don’t even realize it until the end of the poem hits you upside the head with a smack. It was that poem, followed immediately by “Miss Besieged Sarajevo,” about a beauty contestant during the Bosnian War in 1993, that made me realize I needed to make sure my seat belt was buckled and tray tables were locked securely for takeoff.

I was right.

Murphy writes about the free market, terrorism, the horrors of political torture, banana republics, the frustrations of rush hour, the homeless, the global travels of dust, Dagwood and Blondie as if they lived in the real world, the collapse of a marriage, the experience of a heart attack, his childhood, and more. He writes of New York City and Wales, where he grew and was born, respectively. And all the while, he’s writing candidly, disguising nothing, saying exactly what he means.

The Forgotten Man

You Too Were Once on Fire MurphyThe man who forgot himself rises
out of his cardboard sleep into the concrete morning
to relieve himself of hunger.
Everything has acquired use—trees have become lamp posts,
deer have turned into taxicabs that whistle down
Park Avenue on cloven tires of rain.

He walks among the citizens of this canyon
and sees himself reflected in plate glass, blurred
by blue buses, yellow livery, gray commuters
that dash across his own dim image in the shiny panes.

Eventually, when he recalls his faceless face upon well-fed
mannequins, his life loses sense. He sees himself in shop
window after shop window with his palms open to tokens and change,
open to a currency that will carry him through elements
that are benign, where the trains that rumble beneath
the surface wheeze silently all through the screaming night.

Murphy writes with a raw energy, taking you places you don’t expect to go but understand once you’re there. I flinched at the titles of a few of poems, like “Prostitutes Appeal to the Pope,” until I read them, and I understood what he was saying. I understood enough to know I should trust where this collection was going, and I’m glad I did.

Peter Murphy

Peter Murphy

The author of nine poetry collections, Murphy has also published two memoirs, Looking for Thelma and A Tipsy Fairy Tale, and two books on writing poetry, Challenges for the Delusional and More Challenges for the Delusional. He’s received six creative writing fellowships from the New Jersey State Council on the Arts and several residencies at Yaddo, the Atlantic Center for the Arts, and The Millay Colony, among others. His poems have been published by numerous literary journals, including Guernica, The Literary Review, The New Welsh Reader, Poetry Wales, The North American Review, and many others. He’s led workshops for writers and teachers and been a consultant for numerous organizations, including the Corporation for Public Broadcasting. He’s also the founder of Murphy Writing to help writers develop their craft and the Annual Winter Poetry & Prose Getaway writing conference.

One of the poems of You, Too, Were Once on Fire, “The Business of Clouds,” mentions both William Wordsworth and Emily Dickinson. “As you recall Dickinson’s last words,” he writes, “you begin / to feel the damp body of fog touching you where you / do not wished to be touched.” Dickinson also said of poetry to “tell it slant.” Murphy does not tell it slant; he simply and powerfully tells it.

Photo by Scott1346, Creative Commons, via Flickr. Post by Glynn Young.

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Glynn Young lives in St. Louis where he retired as the team leader for Online Strategy & Communications for a Fortune 500 company. Glynn writes poetry, short stories and fiction, and he loves to bike. He is the author of the Civil War romance Brookhaven, as well as Poetry at Work and the Dancing Priest Series. Find Glynn at Faith, Fiction, Friends.
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