Callie Feyen wrote a beautiful meditation on snow earlier this winter for a poetry prompt. I told her I’ve never seen a January like she described, although it’s always been my wish. It’s why I like this poem — to memorize it was to visit fairyland.
Learning “Snow-flakes” felt like learning a hymn, with its rhythmic pattern. And that’s unsurprising, considering that Longfellow wrote quite a few poems that have been set to music, including I Heard the Bells on Christmas Day.
Out of the bosom of the Air,
Out of the cloud-folds of her garments shaken,
Over the woodlands brown and bare,
Over the harvest-fields forsaken,
Silent, and soft, and slow
Descends the snow.
Even as our cloudy fancies take
Suddenly shape in some divine expression,
Even as the troubled heart doth make
In the white countenance confession,
The troubled sky reveals
The grief it feels.
This is the poem of the air,
Slowly in silent syllables recorded;
This is the secret of despair,
Long in its cloudy bosom hoarded,
Now whispered and revealed
To wood and field.
—Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
What attracted me to the poem was this line: “This is the poem of the air.” Reading it reminded me of an essay by a college classmate from the Rio Grande Valley in South Texas, who wrote about seeing snow for the first time when she traveled with the marching band to a football game in Arkansas. For her, the experience of real, live snowflakes was a poem come to life.
But Longfellow’s poem is not so exuberant. This sky is “troubled.” It feels “grief” and “despair.” The snowflakes are the air’s poem but also its dirge.
Longfellow knew grief; his first wife died after a miscarriage, and his second wife died in a fire. He was one of the first American poets to be taken seriously. He’s best known for his long narrative poems, like “The Song of Hiawatha,” “Paul Revere’s Ride” and “Evangeline.” He translated Dante’s Inferno into English — the first American to do so.
I wonder what about snow suggested concealed grief to Longfellow. I’m not someone who conceals my feelings, so his emotional repression puzzles me. But I like the idea that, for him, snow represents grief transformed.
It’s not unlike the transformation rain undergoes on its journey from the sky to the ground. I learned this from a children’s picture book by Bruce Hiscock called The Big Storm, about a storm that moved across the entire United States from March 31-April 6,1982.
Surprisingly, most raindrops start out as snowflakes. High in the cloud where the air is very cold, ice crystals gradually grow into snowflakes that are heavy enough to fall. The snowflakes then melt, if it is warm near the ground, and become raindrops.”
Like most humans, I’ve known grief. If Longfellow lived where I do, he’d only experience the full force of that emotion once a year, or even less often. Up north, he had the opportunity to let it fall and fall and fall, amid bare woodlands and forsaken fields.
Hoarding despair brings a coldness to your soul. Whispering it, revealing it, letting it descend like snow-flakes does a heart good. But now I know that when rain falls, a transformation has already occurred.
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By Heart for March
For the next By Heart gathering, March 27, we’ll learn “Dippold the Optician” by Edgar Lee Masters from Spoon River Anthology by heart.
178. Dippold the Optician
WHAT do you see now?
Globes of red, yellow, purple.
Just a moment! And now?
My father and mother and sisters.
Yes! And now?
Knights at arms, beautiful women, kind faces.
A field of grain—a city.
Very good! And now?
A young woman with angels bending over her.
A heavier lens! And now?
Many women with bright eyes and open lips.
Just a goblet on a table.
Oh I see! Try this lens!
Just an open space—I see nothing in particular.
Pine trees, a lake, a summer sky.
That’s better. And now?
Read a page for me.
I can’t. My eyes are carried beyond the page.
Try this lens.
Depths of air.
Excellent! And now?
Light, just light, making everything below it a toy world.
Very well, we’ll make the glasses accordingly.
— Edgar Lee Masters
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