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Poetry Classroom: The Painted Lady and the Thistle

By Julie L. Moore 3 Comments

Welcome to this month’s poetry classroom, with poet and professor Julie L. Moore. We invite you to respond to the poems we’ll share here—their forms, images, sounds, meanings, surprises—ask questions of Julie and each other, and write your own poems along the way.



The Painted Lady and the Thistle

The painted lady alights on thistle,
    its winged mosaic aflutter with brilliance

and thirst. Here is Adam again,
    his brow stitched in toil,
his back breaking out in sweat.

    What will the blossom, edged
with thorny predicaments, offer

    as this butterfly plunges
its proboscis into the core
    ablaze with being?

Of course you already know.
    Every sip, a miracle, a curse

that never disappoints the one
    whose instinct is to drink
first, ask questions later.

Photo by Somecrazy. Creative Commons, via Flickr. Poem by Julie L. Moore, author of Particular Scandals

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Discussion Questions:

1. Poetry sometimes relies on the art of comparison. Would you have chosen to compare a Painted Lady to Adam? What parts of the comparison work best for you?

2. The poet has chosen to indent every other line. Would the poem feel any different or lose any meaning if all the lines remained flush left?

3. Can you relate to the instinct to drink first, ask questions later? What is the risk of being that kind of person, or of not being that kind of person? How do you think the poet feels about such a person (the kind who drinks first)?

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Comments

  1. Maureen Doallas says

    July 15, 2013 at 1:49 pm

    The format moves the eyes back and forth slightly, reminding me of the motion of wings.

    I like the painted lady-Adam link. . . all those temptations in nature (and Eden); not everything being what it appears, etc. A beautiful turn with that “Of course you already know.”

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  2. Julie L. Moore says

    July 17, 2013 at 3:24 pm

    Thank you, Maureen, for your insightful comments. For others: How does this poem use paradox to push to deeper meaning?

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  3. Elizabeth W. Marshall says

    July 17, 2013 at 4:03 pm

    The changes in indention indicate for me or suggest, a hovering non-committal. A weaving in and out, the dance of should I or shouldn’t I. Deciding between right and wrong.
    Adam and the Painted Lady comparison work because the PL is wholly dependent on nourishment from a source, the longing and temptation override the allure of the blossom ablaze with being. The thorny predicaments equate to sin and consequences. The use of the word core gives an allusion or reference to the ‘apple” .
    In answer to your question, I hear the poet as ambivalent re: those who drink first and ask later. The lines indentions show ambivalence visually.

    Wonderful poem. Julie thanks for these probing questions and discussion.

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