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Of Parasols and Scorpions

By Glynn Young 7 Comments

Last week, seven of us (and a few lost souls who wandered in and promptly left, determined to stay lost) joined together for our Twitter poetry party. The prompts were all taken from The Voice of Robert Desnos: Selected Poems.

Parasols and scorpions are an odd combination or a title, but, well, you know how poetry is sometimes. It’ll get clearer as we go along. I think. Below are the first three poems and a quartet.

And more is to come.

 

 

Of Parasols and Scorpions

By @llbarkat, @doallas, @jejpoet, @mattpriour, @ERBKs, @mdgoodyear and @gyoung9751; a late entry or two by @SandraHeskaKing; a few retweets by @moondustwriter, @Laura_The_Wise, @TinaNguyen, @jesskristie, @CirclesRoundSun, @Julia_Hensley, @GPWriter, @rasmithii, @roseasho, @Sahrazad528 and @PoeticHeart34; two plaintive cries at having missed the jam by @meilbheag and @vnesdoly; and edited by @gyoung9751. (It takes a whole village to write a poem.)

Love, Falling

She falls for him.
You don’t write forests
with pens,
pistols with stars;
you don’t write love,
just fall
with words etched
in moonlight.

Night and day
the stars sing
murder in white forests
falling.
The phonographs sing
night and day
moon falling
day fallen
murdered love

In Paris, Falling

Songs not of grief
but like rain
falling in Paris.
Etch my heart
with soft rain,
phonograph spinning
Paris memories.

Sweet faces
mime the words
along the Seine.
Night will sing
and day
An old record
of love in Paris.

Eiffel lost
streets lost
faces lost
my wrinkled palms
an old record
crackling
recover memories.

Along the Seine
on the Ile de la Cite
take in the faces
smiling from the ramparts
of Notre Dame
Memories of pistols, voices;
Seine draining to sea,
Seine empty.

Spinning Seed

Begin
where I feel
my beginning
makes claim to hours,
spun together
with the woolen threads
of my end
like a seed falling to the earth
being split asunder
dying.
My woven end
is near the beginning
of hours,
voice empty,
seed unraveled to
time.

A Thunder of New Music: Quartet

1
A thunder of new music
rising, stolen
with kisses,
spread like seed.
I call thunder and music
I call kisses
and seeds split
I call
I call tornadoes and hurricanes
your furies my revenge
and do not answer.

2
Playing out in hours,
empty of your music
and with magic refrains
of the song older than time,
resurrected,
I call to me those lost in the fields,
sprouting like a funnel.

I call
I call
I call
I tornado,
trying to remember
the lost.

3
Playing out time
funnels of history,
magic lost
love lost
songs long forgotten,
I call to me
those lost in the fields.
I collect their stories.
I rewrite their ends.

4
You can have your merely angry wind.
I call volcanoes and earthquakes.
Now the game is on.
The lost fields
the music
the stories woven,
raveled
rewritten.
Tornado spins
and time, nova life,
nova love,
galaxy abandons me.

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Glynn Young lives in St. Louis where he recently retired as the team leader for Online Strategy & Communications for a Fortune 500 company. Glynn writes poetry, short stories and fiction, and he loves to bike. He is the author of Poetry at Work and the Dancing Priest Series. Find Glynn at Faith, Fiction, Friends.
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Comments

  1. L.L. Barkat says

    February 2, 2011 at 9:09 pm

    The plaintive cries. 🙂

    Speaking of cries, these all have a touch of the sorrowful. But lovely.

    Reply
  2. Sandra Heska King says

    February 2, 2011 at 9:15 pm

    Late entry or two. Ha! I can’t even remember what I was doing. But yes, I think I got caught in a funnel . . .

    Reply
  3. April says

    February 2, 2011 at 9:31 pm

    Absolutely amazing!!! So enjoyed this, such interesting work!! 🙂

    Reply
  4. Maureen Doallas says

    February 2, 2011 at 9:43 pm

    I haven’t yet gone back to the tweets to stitch words. I think now I don’t need to.

    Reply
  5. Joel E. Jacobson says

    February 2, 2011 at 10:48 pm

    These are fantastic! I went back through my twitter feed to see what I had written and I don’t remember writing half the things I wrote. What a cool experience! Thanks for letting me participate!

    Reply
  6. nancemarie says

    February 3, 2011 at 12:15 pm

    i’m blown away

    Reply

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