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Poetry Prompt: Just the Facts

By Callie Feyen 1 Comment

Just the Facts

The facts of Dave Malone’s “Glory Days” go like this:

1. Children are picking up trash and weeding their lawn.

2. There is a bird bath that fell the night before, and the children pick it back up.

3. The birdbath fell because the father knocked it down.

4. The father was a star baseball player in high school.

5. The father claims Bruce Springsteen wrote “Glory Days” because of his baseball playing.

“The oldest knows this song as deeply/ as the sharp blade of the moon….” I circled “this song” and in the margins asked, “Which is ‘this song’? Bruce’s or the song of a father coming home after having too much to drink? Or is it the song of a person who was once great and is no longer? Or is it all three that make up the soundtrack of this girl’s childhood?

I too, had a family member who drank too much. He loved Jim Croce and the Rocky movies, and he designed his own logo for his very successful business. I can remember the  night he showed my family. We’d finished dinner, but as it was back then, we always stuck around talking and laughing, and he pulled a piece of paper from his pocket and placed it on the table.

“This is so good,” my mom told him, and I remember his smile and how quiet we all were. Every time I hear or read Ollivander hand Harry Potter a wand with a core that came from the same phoenix as Voldemort’s wand and say: “He did great but terrible things.” I think of this person. Knowing all I know, I love him still.

Dave Malone’s “Glory Days” turns the facts of a broken human being into a poem, and it is not a happy poem, but it is a beautiful one. It is a poem that allows you to hold the memories of brokenness and broken people in the palm of your hand, like a baseball, and you are on the mound and the crowd is waiting to see what you’ll do with it, and you turn it all over slowly, feeling the stitches for just a moment longer before you wind up and throw.

Try It: Just the Facts

We are often bound by the hard facts of brokenness, and it seems there’s nothing to create from. However I noticed in Malone’s “Glory Days” that the facts increase in intensity, and he ends the poem by offering us an image that anchors while at the same time sets us off into the world.

This week consider writing down the facts of a memory that is hard. Choose four to five fact, and try to add to their intensity with each one you write. Then see if you can find some sort of anchoring image for the end, turning what is broken into poetry.

Photo by Heinrich Plum  Creative Commons, via Flickr. Post by Callie Feyen.

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Callie Feyen likes Converse tennis shoes and colorful high heels, reading the poetry of Gerard Manley Hopkins, and the Twilight series. Her favorite outfit has always been a well-worn pair of jeans and a white T-shirt, but she wants hoop skirts with loads of tulle to come back into style. Her favorite line from literature comes from Sharon Creech’s Absolutely Normal Chaos: “I don’t know who I am yet. I’m still waiting to find out.” Feyen has served as the At-Risk Literacy Specialist in the Ypsilanti Public Schools and is the author of Twirl: my life with stories, writing & clothes and The Teacher Diaries: Romeo and Juliet.
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Callie Feyen likes Converse tennis shoes and colorful high heels, reading the poetry of Gerard Manley Hopkins, and the Twilight series. Her favorite outfit has always been a well-worn pair of jeans and a white T-shirt, but she wants hoop skirts with loads of tulle to come back into style. Her favorite line from literature comes from Sharon Creech’s Absolutely Normal Chaos: “I don’t know who I am yet. I’m still waiting to find out.” Feyen has served as the At-Risk Literacy Specialist in the Ypsilanti Public Schools and is the author of Twirl: my life with stories, writing & clothes and The Teacher Diaries: Romeo and Juliet.

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  1. Joshua C. Frank says

    January 27, 2023 at 10:15 am

    I wrote this remembering what a big impact visiting Arlington National Cemetery in 2007 had, and still has, on me (I was 23).

    Arlington

    Vast fields of graves, in grass arrayed—
    How many times had Taps been played?
    How many families lost their heads?
    How many sons left empty beds?

    They gave their lives to save my land,
    Each by an officer’s command,
    And yet, myself? What had I done
    To be my country’s worthy son?

    The image never went away—
    The grid of gravestones, here to stay,
    In ranks and files, neatly lined,
    Still marks a lattice in my mind.

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