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The Poetry Club Tea Date ✨ Braiding His Hair

By T.S. Poetry 9 Comments

the teaWelcome to this week’s poetry club tea date!

Get your favorite steep (or brew) and join us in writing a quick poem based on the following line, submitted by Every Day Poems reader Pauline Beck. The line is from the recent poem delivery Braiding His Hair by Alison Luterman.

It must have happened while we slept,
as most things do

Your Pour

Take a moment to write a poem based on the shared line. Then add to the comment box (with a touch of cream and sugar) so other club members can enjoy.

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Looking for more inspiring lines? Check out the Every Day Poems poetry club room, where we feature additional favorite lines submitted by readers.

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  1. Monica Sharman says

    October 22, 2020 at 8:16 am

    A boy in a dream
    with his waiting father.
    One hand clasped in two,
    proving strength
    can be tender.
    A woman in a white blouse
    laughing with friends
    and telling her daughter,
    “I have joy now.”
    Hands on a face, fingers
    by the temples.
    A leaning into arms.
    These happened while we slept
    as the best things do.

    Reply
  2. Joyson C. J says

    October 22, 2020 at 1:18 pm

    It must have happened while we slept
    As most things do
    In children’ s lives too
    Many a time the memory did I shoo
    But it stuck like glue
    Pa called while savouring his stew
    Ma heard not for she was out of view
    Pa called her anew
    But she had much to sew
    Boiling over, he left bidding her adieu
    Ma sat unperturbed for she knew
    Her man’s face would brighten like dew
    At the sight of a brownie in myriad hue
    This story for the breakfast topping she had kept

    Reply
    • L.L. Barkat says

      October 27, 2020 at 8:27 am

      Joyson, I like the rhyme plays here. And I like the turn at “sew,” which introduces a different rhyme with the same visual, so it momentarily captures our attention in a new way at the moment of introducing the poem’s shift. Nice. 🙂

      Reply
      • Joyson C. J says

        October 28, 2020 at 5:08 am

        L. L. Barkat, I thank you for your words of appreciation. It is inspiring and encouraging me to write better.

        Reply
        • L.L. Barkat says

          October 28, 2020 at 1:30 pm

          We’re happy to have you with us, Joyson. Keep writing! 🙂

          Reply
  3. Jenna Brack says

    October 26, 2020 at 11:38 am

    When did your grunting
    become round-lipped
    cooing become consonant
    babbling? When did words enough
    to demand breakfast become
    entire meal times filled with stories?
    It must have happened
    while we slept, although I cannot
    remember any sleeping,
    only the noises to which I
    always woke, the daily
    asking and answering,
    the sound of you
    becoming

    Reply
    • Joyson C. J says

      October 27, 2020 at 1:54 am

      Jenna, I felt your poem as an attempt to make sense of relationships amidst the humdrum of modern existence.
      It’s good.

      Reply
  4. Pauline Beck says

    October 29, 2020 at 2:33 pm

    It must have happened as we slept
    as most things do.
    Winter waltzed in while the lights
    were out and danced away
    all our springs and summers.
    It must have happened while I dreamed
    of dancing forever here
    in a dimly lit living room
    with you alive and, well,
    quite the dancer and lover.
    It must have happened while we slept
    that someone cut in,
    cut out our springs and summers,
    cut short our winter dance
    and waltzed you off alone.
    I awoke and threw my dancing
    shoes away.

    Reply
    • Joyson C. J says

      October 31, 2020 at 4:45 am

      Pauline, I loved your poem. It has taken off beautifully from the cue. I like the ending too with that surprising turn

      Reply

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