From sandmen, to silver shells, to the group The Four Shells (and, no pun originally intended, artist Rasmus Seebach), our new playlist will give you an ocean of sound to write by…
Sand, shells & sea glass. Strolling along tidal pools and long stretches of beach at low tide, you never know what treasures you might find.
Poetry Prompt:
Write a poem about a walk on the beach, looking for the perfect shell.
Thanks to everyone who participated in last week’s poetry prompt. Here’s a poem from Maureen we enjoyed:
When light bends
at 22 degrees, the sun
dog shows its face, red-
edge glints in my eyes,
the brightest spots
on my horizon
Photo by Jonathan Pincas. Creative Commons license via Flickr. Post by Heather Eure.
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Jonathan Shipley says
A SAND DOLLAR
I’ve come back to the place you died.
I never thought I would. It was too
much seeing you that night when the
wave pulled you out. Like you were
the ocean’s and not for me. You were
for me, though. Married eight
years. Three kids. A normal wonderful
beautiful life. And then the ocean
took you. We’re out here now – me
and our kids – to remember you.
How can we forget? You’re on my mind
every moment of the day. My heart
doesn’t beat my own blood. My
breaths aren’t my own. I can’t wait
to see you again, but I can wait
to see you again. Our kids need
me now more than an ocean ever
could need you. Alex brought me
a sand dollar. “This one,” she said,
and I put it in my pocket. When
we get home, we’ll place it in
bowl on the dining room table
filled with the shells you collected
with the kids. Remember that
conical one you found by the
lighthouse with her – the yellow
one – ten minutes before you died?
Laura Brown says
Oh, my. I don’t know what to say, except that I have been thinking about this one all day. Don’t know whether it is your true story or a narrator with an imagined story. Powerful either way; especially poignant if it’s the first.
Heather Eure says
Staggering and beautiful.
Maureen Doallas says
Thank you for including that little poem of mine here. I find sun dogs and moon dogs fascinating.
Maureen Doallas says
Wish
The ocean soughs, wanting
to re-place the conch, pinned
in the dune turned suddenly sallow
below the moon-blued sky. Not
a nest for the turtle eggs, broken
sacs spilling unseen hearts,
my own as tiny as the smallest
wish I made for you.
Richard Maxson says
Wonderful! Loved the line endings.
Heather Eure says
And I love the first line.
Rosanne Osborne says
Lust or Life
I hold the tiny mollusk
in my hand, my lust for his shell
struggles with his right to live
whatever life he has. His brown beauty
lies beyond the borders of my mind.
My mind will not bend to the design
of the Sidney Opera House
nor comprehend the intricacies
of man’s neural configuration.
My hands cannot paint a Wyeth
nor master a Chopin concerto.
I’ll never conduct the Philharmonic
nor qualify for Wimbledon. Politics
leave me cold, and the calculations
of the chemist seem as confusing
as hieroglyphics on a cave wall.
Why should I presume to take
the life I could never make, place
the shell on a shelf within the crust
that surrounds my life?
I gently stroke the whorls
of his shell, then bury him in the sand.
Later, I wonder, did I keep him
too long in the air? If I caused his death,
shouldn’t I have had his shell?
Richard Maxson says
Rosanne, this is so vulnerable and beautiful. It is a testament to the small and even infinitesimal life that surrounds us, mostly unnoticed. Beautiful writing!
michelle ortega says
What beautiful, complicated humanity!
Heather Eure says
A striking poem. Thanks, Rosanne.
Laura Brown says
This isn’t a new poem (well maybe a few lines are new), but it fits the theme.
Recommended Reading for the Beach
for Peggy B.
No best-sellers, nothing soon to be
a major motion picture. Start with this:
A postcard from your parents, from the day
that they first showed you water without end.
The label from a canister of salt,
the miracle that made your father float.
An invitation from the white sand beach,
engraved, addressed to “Soles (no shoes required).”
Perdido: treasure map that leads you where
you lost yourself the last time you were here.
Etch-a-Sketches drawn by shorebirds’ feet,
shaken blank by the advancing surf.
The daily horoscope of wind and wave,
smooth or rough, becalmed or wild with praise.
The gospel pamphlets from the dolphin pack,
evangelists alert to prophecy.
Sturdy board-book of the toddler-sage
who understands the teasing of the foam.
Magazines of iPod-plugged-in teens,
a page or two, then languid on a towel.
Litanies of petitions from the gulls,
the grasses steadily answering, “Hear our prayer.”
Poems of the seashells at low tide …
limpet, slipper, scallop, angel wing.
Foreign-language lessons of oil tankers,
horizon-hazed, as slow as satellites.
The banner headline of a thundercloud,
then stocks-page agate type of distant rain.
Romance novels, starting at their ends:
wedding parties on the beach at dusk.
Hieroglyphs that baby turtles scrawled,
picking up where unmet moms left off.
The south-aimed beach, a coffee table book —
vanishing points of sunrise and sunset.
The logbook written in your husband’s eyes,
a history you both can tell by heart.
Four palimpsests of faces you two made,
part him, part you, part lines from their own lives.
The hymn the lighthouse knows, its beacon’s sweep
a rhythmic chorus — hear it? “All is well.”
At last, the Compline of the shrimpers’ nets:
Grant us peaceful night and perfect end.
Maureen Doallas says
Wonderful details in this, Laura.
Jody Lee Collins says
Laura–those metaphors just made me pause with joy. I grew up on Southern California beaches and am still within 3 miles of the coast here in the PNW and we visit often. I could picture each ‘story’ you wrote. Lovely.
Laura Brown says
Thank you, Jody. This is about Perdido Key in Alabama on the Gulf coast. I wrote it for a friend who was dying of cancer and taking one last beach vacation with her family. I haven’t been there myself, but I got many details from someone else who has.
Richard Maxson says
Laura, I read this three times for the images it gave to me. So much detail without breaking the rhythm is not easy to do. I kept saying, “this is my favorite line…no this one is. The poem greatly expands its actual size. And then to end with “perfect end.” I loved it!
Heather Eure says
I second Maureen’s sentiments. I read it again and find something new.
Maureen Doallas says
Playing with some facts about conch shells:
Conch
1
The perfect shell would
carry its carry its own
house on its back, its ridged-roof
evidence of long experience
at sea, the snail’s knowledge
of basic survival in the whorl
of water through the siphonal canal.
2
The perfect shell would
explode God’s breath in the blow hole,
calling the sun to night, the moon
to bed near the Scorpion’s tail,
Orion to draw back his bow
to fell the unruly Ursa Major.
3
The perfect shell would
hold the ink of scribes sky-
writing their poems the length
of cirrostratus clouds.
4
The perfect shell would
parry with intruders after
the queen’s pink pearls,
cut with a crystalline edge
sharp as concertina wire
hands that hallow the flame
beyond the sea wall.
5
The perfect shell would
mute the mouth full
of the meat of the mollusks.
Maureen Doallas says
Unintended doubling of words; revise to: The perfect shell would / carry its own house / on its back, its ridged roof / evidence ….
michelle ortega says
#3 is my favorite image. 🙂
Heather Eure says
“Explode God’s breath in the blow hole”
Another poem to love.
Maureen Doallas says
Thank you, Heather, for this and your other comments.
Davis Rosback says
The sand a gritty colour of dishwater blond
It was sticking wet to my white cold feet
I only wanted to find a memory to take
A smooth black stone
One would surely feel good in my palm
I looked up from scanning the sand
And from watching my feet sinking
and making little foot-sized lakes
I could see through the tunnel of my hood
A woman standing in place
Going nowhere
I headed my hood in her direction
There she was all long nails painted
The pinkness skuffed and chipped
From collecting black rocks
The kind that she thought might
Have something inside
When she broke them open
I continued on my way
Of the hunt for a smooth stone
That would feel good in the hand
michelle ortega says
The contrast between the people, the hunt and the treasure sought…beautiful!
I love the feel of a smooth stone in my hand. 🙂
Richard Maxson says
Shells
—For Abby (married 7/6/14, now in a new home)
The hermit crabs are practicing and
my daughter brings them shells
as they grow. In the dead of night,
like bad tenants, they move
to another home; she is delighted.
She doesn’t know they are practicing.
One day Kirby dies, her favorite.
She cries and I tell her Kirby has moved,
like when he changed shells, but she says
death, and that he is gone and buried
in the matchbox under the roses; she cries.
She will not have another one, and I learn
suggestions are not welcome. The survivor,
only a reminder of the dead, receives little care.
This is a chasm between us — a dead crab
that so much depended on. In the Winter
she searches each wave as if a resurrection is at hand,
but hope does not suffice. Time moves
into November’s shell and she hears a blessing.
Care moves into love for the other, and new shells.
She watches the Spring garden, the snow receding,
the first rose slowly emerging from the green bud.
Maureen Doallas says
Excellent, Richard!
Richard Maxson says
Thanks, Maureen.
Heather Eure says
A gratifying end, full of hope. Marvelous.
Richard Maxson says
From the Horizon
All morning you stared past the waves
to where time vanished into the sky.
Beyond that line you could not see me
looking back now with wonder, from where
I tell you not to be afraid of that horizon.
What did you imagine there, an island
with tide pools, your small, narrow arm
thrust deep in their waters;
the sightless stars languidly waiting
for the touch of your sightless fingers?
Heather Eure says
Languid is one of my favorite words.
Richard Maxson says
Helix
He sat in the sand
and thought
about sand taken out to sea;
he thought
about the waves
swallowing castles,
and thought
about the sea:
what it had made,
is making.
He thought
about great ships
dissolving through millennia,
like pollen
in the rain;
and for himself
he wanted believing
to survive the dark
night of death,
not memory,
only the mystery
of this shell
and its whorls.
Heather Eure says
Swallowing castles! Brilliant.
michelle ortega says
i stop seeking
perfection in
the delicacy of
fragments on
the shoreline
it is freedom to
surrender the
(futile) mending of
the fractured
together
and instead to
feel with
my feet the
edges and
curves of
breaking
in the relentless
steady coming
forth of
the surf
on the sand
and to seek
not expected shapes
(a constancy in
form) but the inner
colors and curves
unique to what
is made from
just one piece of
shattered
i stop seeking
perfection in
the delicacy of
fragments on
the shoreline
Maureen Doallas says
Delighted to see your poem here, Michelle!
michelle ortega says
Thank you, Maureen!
Heather Eure says
“I stop seeking perfection…” Wonderful, Michelle.
SimplyDarlene says
i smile as i grind
sand in my sandals
grit between my toes –
my husband sits on curb
brushes grains off before
shoes go on
we drive each other
nuts
nuts
nuts
pass the smoked
almonds and honey
lemonade – and no
i don’t want to change
my shorts i say
as i line shells across
the dash
this is the way we share
summertime
michelle ortega says
Priceless image! I love the feel of sand between my toes when I am on the beach. And then I change my shorts and dust off the feet before getting back into the car. But I LOVE to have sand all over the mats on the floor of the car, and usually throw the day’s shell store there for the rest of the year.
SimplyDarlene says
🙂
Heather Eure says
Sharing summertime. Such a nice way to live.
Monica Sharman says
Looks like Laura Boggess participated without realizing it. 🙂 I’ll take the liberty of linking her poem here:
http://www.lauraboggess.com/2014/07/the-sea-gives-back-poem.html
Heather Eure says
I’m so glad you did, Monica.
Lovely poem, Laura!
(pass it along to her, if you would) 😉
laura says
Thank you, Heather 🙂
laura says
Thank you for bringing me along to the party, Monica! Immersing myself in the rich conversation here this morning. It’s our last day by the sea and I’m sad to say goodbye to our holiday. But, just as the ocean, life must have this ebb and flow. See you the landlocked!
Glynn says
I thought about sea glass, and then glassy sea, and I just seen an old photograph in an exhibit at the art museum, and one thing led to another. http://faithfictionfriends.blogspot.com/2014/07/sea-of-glass.html
Heather Eure says
Magical. Thanks, Glynn. Glad you’re here.
Karen King says
Beach Trip
Young legs
Ache from jumping the waves and
Chasing pillaging gulls
Countless
and counted times
Stickiness of the sea
Coating
Sand stuck to every wetness
Raised sores from the man o’ war
Pickled skin from days long sun
Laughter
Stickiness
Sweat
Joy
Salt
Agony
Exuberance
Exhaustion
Childhood
The perfect little seashell
Sitting stoic on my dressing table
At the nursing home
Heather Eure says
Expressive words. Thank you, Karen.
Karen King says
For the Sea
Your surf rubs smooth
The defined edges of my memory,
Washing away what it once was.
Polishing between salt and sand
the broken shards of glass
I press between my fingers,
Wishing for blood and pain
To bring me back.
The salty air stifled my breath
As I watched his body bend to the surf
Break upon the rock.
Littered sea floor with
crushed shells and bones,
a mollusk or a child,
worn and washed
In endless tides they lay.
The surf wears upon me now
Rubbing the creases of my brain smooth,
Your reprieve from my sanity
Those waves of blood that incessantly,
rhythmically wash through my body
as your tides pulse under the moon.
I gave my salty tears back to you.
Drown the pieces of him with those.
Heather Eure says
Washes away. The melancholy of this temporal life. Lovely, Karen.
Marcy Terwilliger says
“Broken Seashell” written about five years ago.
I am a seashell,
Beautiful and shiny.
My life is on the ocean’s
Floor as I dance around in
The clear blue sea.
Sun shines on my day after day,
Sand is cool on my shell.
I am happy living in the sea.
Rolling around here and there,
No one to bother me.
One day the sky grew dark,
Sun went away and the ocean
Floor turned dark while winds,
Above me pitched frightfully.
Waves roared,
Suddenly, I lay upon the shore.
Upon wet, cool, sand,
The sky above turned bright.
Sounds around me,
Suddenly I’m in deep, dark pain.
Oh No, I Cry!
I’m just pieces scattered in the sand.
Waves roll over me, yet they don’t,
carry me back out to sea.
Oh can I go on, I lie here broken.
Waves pass me by,
Sun bakes down upon my soul.
I’m alone, Is this the end?
Glisten, no, not anymore,
No hope, only pity for a broken soul.
Sun is sitting,
Day is gone.
No one seeks me out,
Will my pain ever cease?
Where are the souls to help.
The broken shell like me?
They left this world long ago,
Way ahead of me.
Marcy Terwilliger says
Revised Version of “Broken Seashell.”
I am a broken seashell,
Washed up from the floor of the ocean.
Here I lie bleeding on the cool,
Wet, summer sand.
Time was once when I was whole,
Beautiful, but no more.
Now I lay broken in pieces,
Far too many to count.
People walk by and crush me even further,
They step upon my frail heart.
Can’t they see it’s still me?
Look people, look it’s me,
I still need you.
Can you see my broken heart?
Can you feel my pain?
Don’t you even care?
Time, don’t talk to me about time,
Right now I need something for the pain.
Parts of me are gone,
Broken and gone.
Washed out to sea,
That dark bottomless pit.
I’m never going to get them back.
They are gone forever.
What do I need?
I need someone, yes someone,
To make me whole again.
God, my Holy Father in Heaven,
Are you still there?