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Oh, Annabel: Words of My Father

By Darrelyn Saloom 45 Comments

Girl Reflected on memorizing poe

Memorizing Poe: I’ll Never Know Why

Daddy sang age-old ballads, country tunes, folk songs, and recited Edgar Allan Poe. A traveler with an adventurous spirit, he regaled me with long stories of swimming in lakes, rivers, and oceans, or of indigenous people in faraway lands who welcomed him into their lives and homes. He’d been disoriented but never lost in the Darien Jungle. And he once woke up perched on a cliff after crashing his car into a tree.

His stories of the Second World War were among my favorites. Every day he volunteered to plow minefields with a half-track. Until he saw a crater as large as the moon and decided to cut his odds and share that duty with other soldiers who called him “Wilkie.” When bombs lit up the night’s sky, he’d sneak from camp and into the arms of a French girl in a nearby village.

Busted back to private, he seemed to always get caught. Which never stopped him, only inspired clever new ways to escape. He once ordered a man off his bicycle to find that French gal and return to his guarded tent at sunrise. Busted again.

He earned back a stripe when caught in crossfire. He and three buddies ducked behind a jeep. The ping of bullets, the smell of hot metal. He told them to wait for an enemy reload, then dash to a nearby safe building, one at a time. Noise, silence, then “Run!” my father shouted. Daddy sprinted last and felt the heat of a bullet whizz past his left ear.

He always ended that one by saying, “But then I met another gal in another village and got busted back to private again.”

Those stories were usually told while he drove. With Daddy, my sisters and I were always traveling and singing songs. We would listen to his soft, melodious voice spill dozens of poems but mostly “The Raven” and “Annabel Lee.” As a child, I once asked when he had met Mr. Poe, and he just said, “During and after the war.”

Hard to believe it was cancer that killed him at seventy-one. The last two years of his life he had to stay put, though he did take up skydiving. Only four hours away, my sister Jeanne and I visited often to dance with him and drink memories of song lyrics, stories, and poems. I asked numerous questions, even recorded a few of his tales. Yet I never thought to ask my word-loving father:

What compelled you,
Kentucky-born son
of a dandy, failed farmer,
to memorize Poe’s “The Raven” and “Annabel Lee”?

Photo by Bjorn Giesenbauer. Creative Commons, via Flickr. Post by Darrelyn Saloom.

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Darrelyn Saloom
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Darrelyn Saloom is co-author of My Call to the Ring: A Memoir of a Girl Who Yearns to Box, with Deirdre Gogarty, Ireland’s first female world boxing champion— and Ottawa University: 150 years of Significance with Dave Malone. Her work has appeared at JaneFriedman.com, Writer’s Digest, Boxing.com, Suzanne Kingsbury, Catching Days, Hippocampus Magazine, and the Virginia Quarterly Review.
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About Darrelyn Saloom

Darrelyn Saloom is co-author of My Call to the Ring: A Memoir of a Girl Who Yearns to Box, with Deirdre Gogarty, Ireland’s first female world boxing champion— and Ottawa University: 150 years of Significance with Dave Malone. Her work has appeared at JaneFriedman.com, Writer’s Digest, Boxing.com, Suzanne Kingsbury, Catching Days, Hippocampus Magazine, and the Virginia Quarterly Review.

Comments

  1. L. L. Barkat says

    June 15, 2012 at 8:45 am

    Darrelyn, I love this vignette of your dad. I love the question you both ask and somehow actually answer along the way (yet the tension remains… we’ll never *really* know why he memorized Poe).

    Beautiful piece.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 11:17 am

      Thank you, Laura. It means a great deal to be here among so many wonderful writers. I love what you’ve done. Your daily poems always inspire me.

      Reply
  2. Deirdre Gogarty says

    June 15, 2012 at 10:24 am

    Wonderful piece, Darrelyn.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 11:17 am

      Thanks, Dee. 🙂

      Reply
  3. Carolyn says

    June 15, 2012 at 10:48 am

    What wonderful memories!

    I am so grateful that you have shared these loving memories of your father’s love of life and your times spent with him.. I felt the love from the words written by a daughter about her father.

    I will be re-reading “The Raven” and “Annabel Lee”. Maybe, there is a clue in those words of why your father memorized them.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 12:27 pm

      Thanks, Carolyn. I have some great memories of your father. He and my father-in-law were quite a pair.

      Reply
  4. Charlotte Blanchard says

    June 15, 2012 at 10:58 am

    Beautiful, Darrelyn. You have a way with words…

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 11:18 am

      Thanks for reading, Charlotte. And for taking the time to leave a comment. I’m so glad you enjoyed.

      Reply
  5. Jeanne Strauss says

    June 15, 2012 at 10:59 am

    Aww, this really brings me back to those sweet, treasured, memories of our father. Thank you.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 11:20 am

      I’m so glad I have you to share those memories, Jeanne. I posted the picture of you sitting on Daddy’s lap over on my website.

      Reply
  6. Matthew Kreider says

    June 15, 2012 at 11:01 am

    Our fathers are bound in stories. We don’t celebrate that enough. Beautiful piece.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 11:22 am

      Thanks, Matthew. 🙂

      Reply
  7. Dave Malone says

    June 15, 2012 at 12:20 pm

    I’m going to repeat what everyone else is saying. 🙂 Just gorgeous, Darrelyn. As hauntingly beautiful as “Annabel Lee.”

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 12:30 pm

      Aw, thank you, Malone. Your poetry is what inspired this piece. I was reading Seasons in Love when it poured out of me.

      Reply
      • Dave Malone says

        June 17, 2012 at 7:52 pm

        Wowee! That’s an amazing compliment. Thank you…

        Reply
  8. Christian Allman says

    June 15, 2012 at 3:34 pm

    You write with such wonder, such love, it is impossible not to feel almost as close to your remarkable father as you obviously were. Although you regret not asking him the question about Poe, I suspect you’ve puzzled out the answer in your own heart these many years later. Thank you, for all of the rest of us who miss our own fathers.

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    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 7:57 pm

      Thanks, Christian. So glad you enjoyed. Matthew nailed it in an earlier comment when he wrote: “Our fathers are bound in stories.” As well as our mothers I might add. My pair left me with plenty to write about and puzzle out. I’m truly thankful for that.

      Reply
  9. Mary Kellner says

    June 15, 2012 at 3:46 pm

    Beautiful! This piece reminds me of my own dad and all of the time I got to spend with him making my own memories. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 7:59 pm

      Mary, Your father was brilliant. I know how much you must miss him. So glad I could spark some memories.

      Reply
  10. Sally G. says

    June 15, 2012 at 3:49 pm

    Poignant, lovely and funny. Those lucky French girls…he must have seemed larger than life to his two young daughters!! Romance and intrigue, I just loved the way you evoked that in your piece, with such warmth and love.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 8:03 pm

      Ha! I try not to think of Daddy from the points of view of those French girls. But his daughters sure adored him. Thanks, Sally G.

      Reply
  11. Jonathan Page says

    June 15, 2012 at 9:39 pm

    I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing these wonderful stories about your father.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 10:18 pm

      My pleasure, Jonathan. Thanks for the kind words.

      Reply
  12. Jenny says

    June 15, 2012 at 10:03 pm

    What a blessing that Grandpa lives on through the stories you share. This piece is simply beautiful. I wish I could have heard them in-person, but this is definitely the next best thing. Thanks for sharing, Aunt D.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 15, 2012 at 10:21 pm

      I’m happy to keep his memory alive for you, Josh, and Baby Jane. Hope to talk to you soon.

      Reply
  13. Tania Runyan says

    June 16, 2012 at 12:43 am

    What a beautiful piece for Father’s Day. And it reminds me, as a mom, to tell more of my own stories (though not as exciting) to my kids. I catch myself thinking they’d be bored, so i often stay silent. But where would we be without our parents’ stories?

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    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 16, 2012 at 11:06 am

      Tania, Write down those family stories. Your children will love it. I believe there are no ordinary people. We all have our quirks and flaws and beauty. Which is extraordinary, don’t you think?

      Reply
  14. Ayse Su says

    June 16, 2012 at 9:36 am

    This is so beautiful. It got me thinking about how much I value the conversations I have with my own dad.

    It sounds like your father was an extraordinary man and the way you write about his memories made me smile.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 16, 2012 at 11:02 am

      Tania, Write down those family stories. Your children will love it. I believe there are no ordinary people. We all have our quirks and flaws and beauty. Which is extraordinary, don’t you think?

      Reply
      • Darrelyn Saloom says

        June 16, 2012 at 11:05 am

        Sorry, Ayse Su, I posted my comment to Tania in the wrong box.

        So glad you enjoyed the piece. I hope you are able to talk to your dad this father’s day. Enjoy every moment.

        Reply
  15. Connie Mace says

    June 16, 2012 at 3:05 pm

    Thank you, Darrelyn for sharing such a wonderful glimpse of your dad with us. Loving dads are a true blessing and it’s an honor to “meet” yours.

    Reply
    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 16, 2012 at 3:35 pm

      Thank you, Connie. I’m so glad you enjoyed “meeting” my father. 🙂

      Reply
  16. cynthia newberry martin says

    June 18, 2012 at 10:58 am

    Sometimes real life is better than fiction and that’s true here–an adventurous story-telling dad who recited “The Raven” and “Annabel Lee.” No wonder you are who you are : )

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    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 18, 2012 at 11:14 am

      To introduce your children to poetry is a lasting gift indeed. No doubt, Daddy’s love of words rubbed off on my sisters and me. 🙂

      Reply
  17. Cindy says

    June 24, 2012 at 12:00 pm

    Darrelyn, This is great. I have more insight now into where your spirit and drive come from! Thanks for sharing.

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    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 24, 2012 at 1:04 pm

      Thanks for stopping by, Cindy. 🙂

      Reply
  18. Lyn Sofras says

    June 26, 2012 at 12:22 pm

    This is beautiful! I can hear the music and rhythm of the words in my head as I read. And the understated eloquence of the sentiments really moved me. What a lovely tribute to a dear one.

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    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      June 26, 2012 at 1:47 pm

      Thank you, Lyn, for the lovely words. And for taking the time to read and leave a comment.

      Reply
  19. Debra Marrs says

    June 30, 2012 at 6:35 pm

    A father’s love shows in so many unexpected ways. How easy it is to take for granted that love. Stories are stories are stories. But then… Only in adulthood do we realize we knew them and knew them not. Thankfully, my dad is still living and there is still time to ask him those important questions. And I often do. Thanks for the lovely reminders, Darrelyn.

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  20. Darrelyn Saloom says

    June 30, 2012 at 7:43 pm

    You’re most welcome, Debra. Glad you enjoyed and even happier to learn your dad is still around to share his stories. Be sure to tape a few. You’ll love hearing his voice when he’s gone.

    Reply
  21. Jon Lewis says

    January 29, 2013 at 11:14 am

    That was wicked sweet, so familiar feeling like I’ve met your Dad and know exactly what you are talking about. Thanks for sharing this.

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    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      January 29, 2013 at 11:38 am

      Thanks, Jon. Glad you enjoyed. I love to share stories of my father, so you are most welcome.

      Reply
  22. Cyd Madsen says

    January 29, 2013 at 5:40 pm

    Simply lovely. You’ve painted quite a portrait with swift, clean strokes. He sounds like quite the rapscallion with a touch of mystery. Very nicely done and a joy to read.

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    • Darrelyn Saloom says

      January 29, 2013 at 6:47 pm

      Thanks, Cyd. Daddy radiated joy, so I’m thrilled it came through in this piece and rubbed off on you.

      Reply

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