random acts of poetry

Look Up, (and Don’t Blush)

6 Comments 11 November 2011

news whip

With a poem in her head, and a camera in her hand, Tina Howard went searching. The inspiration she found came from looking up.

Now, don’t blush, but here’s a poem of mine that decides to take advantage of a different perspective too, a looking up…

The Coming

Muse needed,
I hung the sign at the top of my door.

Meantime, you’d been passing by every morning,
checking out the way spearmint gum
looked different from bubblegum
when pressed to the sidewalk
by Italian leather, white rubber, dragon heels.

Once, I think without either of us realizing,
you looked up my skirt

(it was my fault, really, for getting back
on the step-ladder to fiddle with the flat head
of the nail I’d placed the chain upon, and really
you did it without thinking—but maybe
a lack of thought makes it your fault).

What happened next
cannot be explained except perhaps
by a directional taboo (you must ask Genji)
that turned you away from the bubblegum
and led you straight through my front door,
sign banging behind you. You came to me
in a great rush—no pretense, no pride—
and have been, ever since, unfastening
and opening my skirt.

How about you? Could you find a poem by looking up? If so, post your link on our Facebook Wall by Wednesday, November 16th, for links and possible feature here, at The High Calling, or at Every Day Poems.

News Whip photo, by Claire Burge. Used with permission. Post by L.L. Barkat. Visit L.L. at Seedlings in Stone, for more on writing, poetry, art and life.

___________

Subscribe to Every Day Poems— Read a poem a day, become a better poet. In November we’re exploring the theme By Heart, on memorizing or becoming one with poetry.

Every Day Poems

Your Comments

6 Comments so far

  1. Heather says:

    I love this.

    LOVE THIS.

  2. L. L. Barkat says:

    Thanks, Heather. I don’t always share these kinds of poems; oh, but I do have them, I do :)

  3. I always see poems when I look up. Sometimes it’s a starry sky, sometimes it’s a tall building, sometimes tree tops, sometimes clouds… but always a poem.

  4. Kelly Sauer says:

    This is fun – it leaves a little ambiguity as to whether the muse is the character of which you speak…

  5. HisFireFly says:

    Took a break from NaNoWriMo to join in! Poetry feeds me in ways that fiction cannot!


Trackbacks/Pingbacks

  1. My Mentors | Know-Love-Obey God - November 16, 2011

    [...] the “Looking Up” poetry prompt (due Nov. 16—still not too late to join us!).) GA_googleAddAttr("AdOpt", "1"); [...]

Share with our Community

Post a comment

Get Our Weekly Newsletter

June 17th. Sign up now!

Fiction Jumpstart Workshop. Dream of writing the breakout novel? Jumpstart your fiction by working with best-selling author and award-winning journalist Anthony Connolly.

How to Think Like a Creative Genius Workshop. Need to work especially on your writing voice? Or just want to think more creatively, for personal or professional reasons? Scientist and poet Kathryn Neel will help you build a surprisingly creative life.

Sponsor Poetry (& Happiness)

Every day at Tweetspeak we work hard to bring happiness and personal growth to our audience. Sure, it costs. We could talk about that in terms of what it takes to make a house downpayment, for instance (and not in South Dakota either, you betcha).

Or we could just say this: we do it happily. If you want to be part of that happiness in a small way, you could "Subscribe" for a year. Well, and that would make us happy too. Yep.

We aren't offering anything gimmicky in return. Just a chance to make us smile and keep us mortgage-free. And either way, Tweetspeak will be here for you every day.

We'd love to tweet or Facebook our thanks to you if you sponsor. (And that's no gimmick.) Just tell us not to if you prefer to stay secret.

Sponsor Happiness

Advertisement

Read. Write. Live.

At Tweetspeak Poetry, we are committed to helping people become who they really are. We believe in the power of community reading, writing, and just plain living, to accomplish this.

Read.

Poetry Classroom

Book Club

Write.

Poetry and Fiction Prompts

Poets & Writers Toolkit

Live.

Artist Date

Poetry at Work

Follow Poetry









StumbleUpon Button

Tweetspeak RSS Feed

Google+



Categories

Poetry Button for Your Blog

I Read Light

Click for more button options

Poetry at Work for Your Blog

Poetry at Work-Watch

You can easily follow our inspiring Poetry at Work posts. Add one of our Poetry at Work buttons to your blog or website today!

Click for more button options

Advertisement

More time, less worry. We help creative minds and lives get organised.

________

Tweetspeak generates 3.1 million impressions per month. Advertise with us today. Get heard.

Our Oprah-Listed Title

A Writing Story

Poetry & Quotes to Share

best prose is that which is most full of poetry Woolf photo by Willingham

Grab a great quote for Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, or your blog. We've got everything from tea and chocolate to poetry and writing quotes. Oh, and there's always love or hope, if you need those too.

Make your own WordCandy now

Poetry Prompt Book, Just $2.99

But Of Course

It makes us happy when you click one of our Affiliate Links. Why wouldn't it? :)

All top
I am

© 2013 Tweetspeak Poetry. Powered by WordPress.

Daily Edition Theme by WooThemes - Premium WordPress Themes