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Winter Stars Book Club: Tragedy – Winter Stars

By Callie Feyen 7 Comments

Hot springs winter stars book club
Winter Stars, the first 10-minute play in Sonia Barkat’s collection, though marked as tragedy, has me considering the possibilities there are in conflict.

First, it’s the playwright’s opening note on “the most important thing.”

The setting of this play is described in detail, but if it must be altered for a stage performance, the most important thing is that the feeling of the clearing—old, beautiful, magical and wild—remain intact in some way. The time of year should also be evident.

We must understand the setting. Not just understand it, but feel it. It is midwinter, and we are in an ancient forest clearing, and so I imagine we readers can picture tall trees with wide trunks, for example.

But Sonia also tells us that if we need to alter the setting in some way (imagine this play performed in an old city, a baseball diamond no longer used, an empty train station), what must not be changed, what readers and performers and showgoers must understand, is the “feeling of the clearing – old, beautiful, magical, and wild.”

These are characteristics that are full of wonder, and that leads to deeper understanding. They are also characteristics that disrupt. Conflict can be like this: if we allow it, in a redemptive way, conflict can disrupt and leads to deeper understanding. Something can become clear.

Second, we have two kings who, every year at midseason, engage in an epic fight. Not only do they fight, but the one who is strongest kills the other. Reading the play though, it is evident that, though there is sibling rivalry, there is also deep love between Holly King and Oak King. They are twin brothers, and so it seems they know each other as well as they know themselves. I consider the recklessness I feel, especially at midwinter, and what of myself must be put to rest so that another part of myself can grow. This does not mean those parts won’t come back—just as seasons return—it means that at times parts of who we are, parts we love, need to at times step aside in order for other parts to shine.

Perhaps being our whole, genuine selves means allowing for the old and the magical; the beautiful and the wild to at times battle, to reveal themselves, to be used. Maybe that’s what it means to see ourselves—and each other—clearly.

Finally, there is the conversation on regret that Holly and Oak have as Holly lies dying. The fight feels different this time. Holly wonders if humans will be sad when, this time, winter doesn’t return. Oak has reflected on humans’ role in Holly’s weakening but Holly thinks if they regret, this means they cared. This reframes for me the phrase, “No regrets.” Maybe it’s all right to have a few regrets—to attend to what you now care for.

“And if not cared,” Holly King says, “then noticed. I hope they notice.”

Noticing, I think, is the beginning of caring. And to care, means to stand at that ancient clearing and feel all the conflicts of the old, the beautiful, the magical, and the wild.

_______________

We’re discussing Sonia Barkat’s collection of 10-minute plays this month.

For Discussion or Journaling:

  1. A tragic play is defined as one that “deals with tragic events, and having an unhappy ending, especially one concerning the downfall of the main character.” Where do you see components of tragedy in “Winter Stars?”
  2. At the end of Romeo and Juliet, the prince calls the people of Verona to tell the story of the two lovers again and again. What good, what opportunities come from telling a tragic story?
  3. Do you see any redemption in conflict? In the story or in your own life?

Photo by scott1346, Creative Commons license via Flickr. Post by Callie Feyen.

 

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Callie Feyen
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Callie Feyen likes Converse tennis shoes and colorful high heels, reading the poetry of Gerard Manley Hopkins, and the Twilight series. Her favorite outfit has always been a well-worn pair of jeans and a white T-shirt, but she wants hoop skirts with loads of tulle to come back into style. Her favorite line from literature comes from Sharon Creech’s Absolutely Normal Chaos: “I don’t know who I am yet. I’m still waiting to find out.” Feyen has served as the At-Risk Literacy Specialist in the Ypsilanti Public Schools and is the author of Twirl: my life with stories, writing & clothes and The Teacher Diaries: Romeo and Juliet.
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Callie Feyen likes Converse tennis shoes and colorful high heels, reading the poetry of Gerard Manley Hopkins, and the Twilight series. Her favorite outfit has always been a well-worn pair of jeans and a white T-shirt, but she wants hoop skirts with loads of tulle to come back into style. Her favorite line from literature comes from Sharon Creech’s Absolutely Normal Chaos: “I don’t know who I am yet. I’m still waiting to find out.” Feyen has served as the At-Risk Literacy Specialist in the Ypsilanti Public Schools and is the author of Twirl: my life with stories, writing & clothes and The Teacher Diaries: Romeo and Juliet.

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  1. L.L. Barkat says

    September 16, 2020 at 10:44 am

    I was privileged to hear Sonia read this play aloud. Both Sara and I were brought to tears in the listening. It is the best climate story I’ve heard to date. So tender. So beautiful. So outside of “this is a big issue” and more to the real heart of things, which is personal loss of who we are and what we love.

    The age-old conflict between the brothers is set up simply by virtue of their roles; there is no way around it. Summer and Winter cannot coexist during the same season—only during that transition time when they are engaged in conversation and, ultimately, the fight.

    And though you’d think that the Oak King might be happy when he no longer has to tussle with his brother (in the most violent of ways!), in fact he is completely filled with sorrow. A lack of conflict in the future will mean that he has “won” for good.

    Yet that winning is no winning at all. Because while it feels like power (he admits it does), it is a power ill-gained due to what the humans have been doing, and it means he will lose his brother forever in that gaining.

    I do agree that it’s interesting to think about conflict. Without it, we don’t grow and change. Without it, we are relegated to a forever-sameness-of-season. I’m more welcoming of the results of conflict now than I used to be. I like to ask myself what the resistances tell me—about the other person (or group) and about me. 🙂

    Reply
    • Callie Feyen says

      September 16, 2020 at 7:02 pm

      I also found the conflict between the two kings tender and nuanced, which is probably why I considered the possibilities in it being redemptive. 🙂

      Reply
      • L.L. Barkat says

        September 18, 2020 at 10:00 am

        It’s interesting, you know? Lack of conflict really comes down to lack of connection. Detachedness. Not caring.

        So, though conflict is uncomfortable, maybe it’s useful to consider that it means we feel some kind of connectedness after all.

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        • Callie Feyen says

          September 20, 2020 at 4:38 am

          Yes. Absolutely. I like this way of thinking very much.

          Reply
  2. Megan Willome says

    September 16, 2020 at 5:10 pm

    Thank you, Callie, for this thoughtful meditation on the first play.

    In answer to your second question, it’s a question asked at the end of the musical “Hadestown” (which, coincidentally, also addresses climate change). Hermes says this:

    It’s a sad song
    But we sing it anyway
    ‘Cause here’s the thing
    To know how it ends
    And still begin to sing it again
    As if it might turn out this time

    Reply
    • L.L. Barkat says

      September 16, 2020 at 6:45 pm

      I love how you are always up on musicals, Megan. Would you recommend that one?

      Reply
    • Callie Feyen says

      September 16, 2020 at 7:03 pm

      “It’s a sad song/But we sing it anyway.” Indeed. I like those lines a lot.

      Reply

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