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Artist Date: Mirrored

By Kathryn Neel 12 Comments

The Artist Date is a dream-child of Julia Cameron. We’ve discussed her book, The Artist’s Way,  and highly recommend both the book and the weekly date. It can be life-changing. It can open your creativity like nothing else. This week, we’re looking in the mirror of the Milky Way.

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Recently I found myself wrestling with a philosophical demon that would not leave me alone, so I did what I always do when such persistent problems come calling: I headed for an extended trek into nature.

Someone once observed that we have the power of all collected knowledge at our finger tips via the Internet and what we use it for, predominately, is to argue with strangers and post pictures of cats. An astute observation and not quite far off from the problem that was dogging me as I unloaded my paddle board from the roof of my car late in the day. Someone I had known for years had posted a comment on Facebook about how the scientific method could not be counted as a legitimate philosophical framework for understanding nature and that it stripped away humans’ (i.e. scientists’) ability to feel wonder and awe. This really bothered me and followed me around like a proverbial rain cloud for days.

When something bugs me that much, I have to retreat into nature to sort it out; so it was, as I launched my bright yellow paddle board into the waters of Mosquito Lagoon at dusk on a Wednesday evening. I chose that particular evening because it was a moonless night and the weather was to be very clear. All the fishermen and pleasure boaters were pulling their boats up on trailers as I was prepping to set off on my adventure. Curious glances were thrown my way, but one of the old timers, a guy I see all the time, waved at me and yelled, “Happy Countin’!” The locals are used to seeing me and other naturalists from the marine center going out at odd hours to observe and count local wildlife, even at night. I waved back and smiled, then launched my board and started paddling for the channel islands out in the middle of the lagoon, as the fire ball sun disappeared behind the mangrove trees.

I got across the boating lanes and to the islands in good time. In the early evening you can hear the sound of the shore birds settling down in their rookeries for the night. Somewhere in the underbrush you can hear the sound of a creature scurrying – maybe a raccoon or some other small animal?

As the light faded, I switched on a headlamp. I use the red light so it doesn’t compromise my night vision and to be visible in case a bigger boat comes along. I paddled over to a shallow area between two of the islands. If I wanted, I could step off the board and the water would only be up to my knees. No chance of getting hit by a speed boat here. I sat down on my board and took off my day pack and stuck it under the elastic riggings at the front of the board. I then carefully spun around so I was facing the rear of the board and lay down. Using the daypack as a pillow, I looked up at the stars as they came out.

The lagoon was very calm that night. There was a slight breeze, but not enough to disturb the surface of the water. The lagoon made an almost perfect mirror of the sky. All the tightness of the week relaxed inside me. My paddleboard and I were cradled by the lagoon and tented by the heavens. I began to take apart what it was that bothered me about the idea that one cannot use the scientific method as a legitimate philosophical way of knowing. Or was it the idea that scientists were incapable of awe and wonder? I slowly teased this knot apart as more and more stars came out. The lagoon gently bobbed my board to soothe me as I worked this through. I could hear some nocturnal bird hunting off in the distance.

Slowly I came to the words that I have felt all along—that it takes a fearless, unflinching love to accept the universe as it is, and for me, as a scientist and a poet, one of the tools I use is the scientific method. It is not a perfect tool, but none are; it does, over time, winnow out deception. It doesn’t give absolute truth because science is in a permanent state of revolution, but it can give an approximation of what we call reality. Once I had the words for what I felt, the annoying demon that had been following me around disappeared. I didn’t need to respond to the Facebook comment. I just needed to know what I thought very clearly. As if in agreement, I looked up and so many stars had come out that I could see the river of the Milky Way above me, and when I carefully stood up to leave I noticed it was reflected in the lagoon. It reminded me of the saying from my Chinese philosophy class, “As above, so below.”

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Photo by ikewinski. Creative Commons, via Flickr. Post by Kathryn Neel.

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Kathryn Neel
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Kathryn Neel used to travel the world for her tech job, and she visited restaurants, bakeries, and chocolate makers along the way. She learned a great deal about making chocolate and eventually founded Sappho Chocolates. She is also a Florida Coastal Naturalist at Canaveral National Seashore.
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Kathryn Neel used to travel the world for her tech job, and she visited restaurants, bakeries, and chocolate makers along the way. She learned a great deal about making chocolate and eventually founded Sappho Chocolates. She is also a Florida Coastal Naturalist at Canaveral National Seashore.

Comments

  1. laura says

    June 4, 2013 at 12:09 pm

    I felt my breath quicken as I accompanied you on this adventure. Something about the night–how it heightens the senses and lends such keen awareness of the Other. Lovely, lovely way to sort through the dissonance.

    Reply
    • Kathryn Neel says

      June 4, 2013 at 10:55 pm

      There is something about venturing out into the quiet and the dark that turns on senses you forget that you have. It certainly gives very real meaning to the idea of grounding and centering to me to be on a paddle board in the river at night.

      Reply
  2. Juliana Kapetanov says

    June 4, 2013 at 2:26 pm

    Beautiful take on the question of the scientific method and the natural world! When I think of science, I don’t usually relate it to poetry, but I love the connections Neel makes. Of course, nothing is perfect or permanent, but it is still easy to find beauty in the fact that everything is constantly changing. When one embraces change, the whole world opens up.

    Reply
    • Kathryn Neel says

      June 4, 2013 at 11:02 pm

      The only thing that is ever certain is change.

      Reply
  3. Monica Sharman says

    June 4, 2013 at 3:41 pm

    I’m guessing that person also thinks there’s no beauty in math.

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    • Kathryn Neel says

      June 4, 2013 at 11:01 pm

      Monica,

      It is funny you should mention beauty and math. There is a quote in the Boston Museum of Science that says something to the effect that a “Mathematician who does not have the soul of a poet, is no mathematician at all”. I’ve always loved that quote though I can’t remember who it is by. Maybe the next time I am in Boston I can check my references. 🙂

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      • L. L. Barkat says

        June 5, 2013 at 10:40 pm

        “It is impossible to be a mathematician without being a poet in soul.”

        —Sophia Kovalevskaya

        You didn’t remember that name, Kathryn? 😉

        As you know, I love the serenity of this piece. Even though you started out far from serene, the night simply made things clear. The night, and the water, rocking.

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        • Kathryn Neel says

          June 6, 2013 at 6:53 pm

          Yeah, not a name that jumped immediately to mind. Though I should have gotten close since she was THE first female Russian mathematician and the first woman to be editor of a scientific journal in Europe. My bad.

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          • L. L. Barkat says

            June 8, 2013 at 2:35 pm

            sounds like a name worth remembering! (hold that thought for the future 😉 )

  4. L. L. Barkat says

    June 5, 2013 at 10:42 pm

    Or maybe it was this guy. Much easier to remember 😉

    “A mathematician who is not also something of a poet will never be a complete mathematician.”

    —Karl Weierstrass

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  5. Monica Sharman says

    June 6, 2013 at 1:52 pm

    Well, since it looks like a collection is forming here… 🙂 This is from Richard Feynman:

    http://youtu.be/zSZNsIFID28

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  6. Kathryn Neel says

    June 6, 2013 at 6:58 pm

    I do love Feynman. His lectures on physics are amazingly accessible for us mere mortals AND he was an artist (he drew and painted under a pseudonym) AND a musician AND just an amazingly cool human being.

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