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		<title>A Sonnet’s Unlikely Resolution</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jan 2012 00:40:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Karen Swallow Prior</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[One of the greatest poets who ever lived worries that his poetry is not good enough]]></description>
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<p>Where would we be without resolutions? Accomplishments would be only accidents, stories incidents just strung along, music mere unending notes, and poetry but a jumble of words. Resolution puts all the pieces together like a completed puzzle. </p>
<p>John Milton’s famous sonnet, “On his blindness,” begins in puzzlement. The speaker (the poem is autobiographical; perhaps we dare say the poet) is pondering the account he will give when he stands before his God for the use he has made of his time and talents. But how unjust! He has suffered the loss of his eyesight—before even half his life is over!—and this God who will hold him to account is the one who wrested away the very tool of his trade—his vision.  Understandably, the poet’s mood quickly worsens in the first half of the poem from puzzlement to dismay, even anger…</p>
<p><strong>On His Blindness</strong></p>
<p>by John Milton</p>
<p>When I consider how my light is spent<br />
Ere half my days in this dark world and wide,<br />
And that one Talent which is death to hide<br />
Lodged with me useless, though my soul more bent<br />
To serve therewith my Maker, and present<br />
My true account, lest He returning chide,<br />
&#8220;Doth God exact day-labour, light denied?&#8221;<br />
I fondly ask. But Patience, to prevent<br />
That murmur, soon replies, &#8220;God doth not need<br />
Either man&#8217;s work or his own gifts. Who best<br />
Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His state<br />
Is kingly: thousands at his bidding speed,<br />
And post o&#8217;er land and ocean without rest;<br />
They also serve who only stand and wait.&#8221; </p>
<p>The poem is a Petrarchan sonnet, a form consisting of an octave followed by a sestet; the octave presents the problem, and the sestet offers the resolution. The situation, as we’ve seen, is quite clear. What’s striking, though, is that the problem is presented in only seven (not eight) lines, not quite in accordance with the rules of the form. What happens in the last line of the octave?</p>
<p>The first half of line 8 declares that the poet asks his question “fondly.” In the seventeenth century, “fond” still retained its original meaning of “foolish.” Thus the poet acknowledges that his query is mere foolishness. Then, mid-line, a new sentence begins, offering the response to the poet’s imploration, given by “Patience,” personified. Patience’s answer, provided in the sestet, is essentially this: God doesn’t need your works. The entire world is under his authority, and countless others are accomplishing his business, but you, too, can serve “who only stand and wait.&#8221; </p>
<p>What a dramatic resolution! One of the greatest poets who ever lived worries that his poetry is not good enough to justify his life. Not only is he offered the reassurance that sometimes simply waiting—with Patience—is enough, but that reassurance comes “soon.” </p>
<p>If we recall rules of the form and go back to that break that is supposed to occur at the beginning of the sestet, in line 9, we find that the resolution starts, not there, but earlier in line 8. The resolution begins with Patience’s reply—or perhaps even with the speaker’s admission of his own foolishness. The expression of the problem is cut short according to the expectations of the sonnet form when the God of the poet breaks the rules in order to bring about resolution. With all the pieces of the puzzle in place, the picture is finally clear, and the poem resolves into a sense of peaceful assurance.</p>
<p><strong><em>Post by <a href="http://www.facebook.com/karenswallowprior" target="_blank">Karen Swallow Prior.</a></em> </strong><br />
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<p><strong>Further Resources, for Teachers or Writer&#8217;s Groups:</strong></p>
<p><a href="http://www.tweetspeakpoetry.com/blog/every-day-poems/" target="_blank">Subscribe to Every Day Poems—</a> Read a poem a day, become a better poet. In January we&#8217;re exploring the theme <em>Resolutions</em>.</p>
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		<title>Alan Shapiro&#8217;s &#8220;Night of the Republic&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jan 2012 09:00:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Glynn Young</dc:creator>
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<p>In <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Night-Republic-Alan-Shapiro/dp/0547329709/ref=cm_cr-mr-title " target="_blank">Night of the Republic: Poems</a></em>, poet Alan Shapiro loads his minds-eye camera with film (or, these days, a disk) and takes a series of detailed, rather stark photographs. His subjects are the common, everyday things we notice only when we need them but generally ignore: a car dealership, a gas station restroom, a park bench, a dry cleaner, a swimming pool, a museum, a doorbell, a funeral home.</p>
<p>Shapiro’s poetic photographs are sharp and clear; we’re not left guessing the subject. But they often lead in an unexpected direction, as common, everyday things can do. Consider “Barbershop,” which becomes a meditation on eternity:</p>
<p>Eternity is the spiral up the poles<br />
spiraling to its endless end.<br />
Time is the vitrine<br />
of antiquated gels,<br />
conditioners, restoratives,<br />
stray sections from yesterday’s Today<br />
all over the table<br />
in the waiting area where<br />
Eternity is waiting…</p>
<p>These are poems to be read two and three times, and then two or three times more, like photographs that need to be reexamined to see how new angles or shades or colors can change the created whole. In “Stone Church,” for example, the emphasis on the stone construction gives way to what happens inside:</p>
<p>…At night, high<br />
over the tiny<br />
galaxy of candles<br />
guttering down<br />
in dark chapels<br />
all along the nave,<br />
there’s greater<br />
gravity inside<br />
the grace that’s risen<br />
highest into rib<br />
vaults and flying<br />
buttresses, where<br />
each stone is another<br />
stone’s resistance to<br />
the heaven far<br />
beneath it…</p>
<p>These photograph-like poems, or poetic photographs, are filled with quiet wonder. And like fine photographs, their meanings can keep changing. <em>Night of the Republic</em> is a stellar collection of poetry.</p>
<p>Shapiro, who has won several poetry awards, is a professor at the University of North Carolina, Chapel Hill. He is also publishing his first novel, <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Broadway-Baby-Alan-Shapiro/dp/1565129830/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1324726835&amp;sr=1-1 " target="_blank">Broadway Ba</a></em>by, in January.</p>
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		<title>Tania Runyan&#8217;s &#8220;A Thousand Vessels&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2012 09:00:16 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Glynn Young</dc:creator>
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<p>Some of the most powerful stories in the Bible are about women – Eve, Sarah, Deborah, Ruth, Esther, Mary, Mary Magdalene, the woman at the well, and the woman who touched Jesus’s clothes, to mention a few of the more obvious ones. Their stories are stories of sin, disbelief, leadership, faithfulness, courage, faith and steadfastness. These stories speak to both men and women, and most likely because they are most of all human stories, things we recognize and understand.</p>
<p>In poetry, these stories can become our stories. That’s what poet <a href="http://taniarunyan.com/index.html" target="_blank">Tania Runyan</a> accomplishes in <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Thousand-Vessels-Tania-Runyan/dp/1602260095/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1326317538&amp;sr=1-" target="_blank">A Thousand Vessels: Poems</a></em> – to write both poems about Biblical characters and non-Biblical characters and situations, to help see the connections to the stories in the Bible and how they apply to us. From &#8220;Beach Walk:&#8221;</p>
<p>I wore my leopard bikini like the mannequin<br />
at Bullock’s: shoulders back, breasts out,<br />
fingertips light on my hips. Dina swiveled<br />
her buttocks in a fuchsia French-cut<br />
that pointed like an arrow between her thighs…</p>
<p>Poems about Dinah (the sister of the 12 sons of Jacob) and her rape are paired with a poem about child sex offenders. Poems about the woman at the well in the gospel of St. John are paired with a poem about the sins committed by a child against another child. Poems about Esther are grouped with a poem about walking on a beach. The stories of Jairus’s daughter are matched to a poem about children who nearly die. In &#8220;Children of Near-Death,&#8221; Runyan describes the near death of a 10-year-old named Edward:</p>
<p>…I dove. No more stuttering in Class. No more stinky<br />
dodgeball courts, the cool kids lobbing<br />
at my face. I swam deeper</p>
<p>a million pounds of water behind me. Kelp waved at me<br />
like a crowd gathered in the grandstand.<br />
Wrapped around my arms and legs</p>
<p>till I couldn’t get loose. Darkness…</p>
<p>These are not all dark poems. To the contrary, these are hopeful poems, not the least for the biblical characters represented and described. But what the addition of the non-Biblical poems does is to make the Biblical characters recognizable and contemporary – the woman who makes a terrible mistake, the woman who scoffs, the woman who assumes a leadership role, the woman who is faithful and caring even when no one expected her to be.</p>
<p>In that sense, <em>A Thousand Vessels</em> becomes a contemporary application of the Biblical stories. It’s a wonderful collection, full of faith, hope and truth.</p>
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		<title>Dave Malone’s “Under the Sycamore”</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Jan 2012 08:00:04 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Glynn Young</dc:creator>
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<p>Quick: name a contemporary love poem.</p>
<p>Hard, right? In contemporary poetry, one doesn’t find much about love – the emotion, the feeling, the condition that is so characteristics of a considerable body of poetry from earliest times to the 20th century. Think <em>Song of Solomon</em>, the Greeks and Romans. Think of Boccaccio, the Elizabethans (those sonnets!) and the Cavalier poets, the Romantics and even the Victorians.</p>
<p>But something happened in the century just past. Perhaps two world wars, a major depression, the rise of the media and the dominance of Freudian psychology pushed love poetry into a forgotten corner. I’ve even heard that feminism made love poetry a dangerous occupation. Whatever the cause or causes, love poetry isn’t what it has been in times before ours.</p>
<p>Which makes <a href="http://www.davemalone.net/ " target="_blank">Dave Malone’s</a> book of poetry <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Under-Sycamore-Dave-Malone/dp/0966807545/ref=sr_1_4?s=books&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1285533159&amp;sr=1-4 " target="_blank">Under the Sycamore</a></em> all the more remarkable. Malone, the author of several books of poetry and a university professor, first published the book in 2003. It is a volume of 100 poems, all untitled and all short (the longest is eight lines). And they are all poems about love – love yearned for, love found, love lost, love regained – almost a story of a relationship that happens over an entire lifetime.</p>
<p>He begins:</p>
<p>Looking at the stars,<br />
I have one thought<br />
where I’m holding you<br />
until they disappear.</p>
<p>And then this:</p>
<p>The moonlight on your face<br />
through the open window<br />
is actually my breath.</p>
<p>These short poems are filled with longing and passion, the self- and shared knowledge of two lovers, along with emptiness, loss and then reconciliation.</p>
<p>I lost my way in the snow<br />
until I heard your voice<br />
in the swirling wind.</p>
<p>To read these poems (and to read them aloud) is to sit in a well-lit, under-furnished room, watching the object of your love, who is unaware of being observed. <em>Under the Sycamore</em> is a beautiful volume of love poems. We need more of them.</p>
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		<title>Rumors of a Blue Geography</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Dec 2011 19:57:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Glynn Young</dc:creator>
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<p>It was another TweetSpeak poetry jam, and this one started with a few rumors. All of the prompts were taken from <em><a href="http://rumorsofwater.blogspot.com/" target="_blank">Rumors of Water</a></em> by L.L. Barkat. And it’s rumored that quite a number of poems emerged during the jam. We’ll have to wait and see what develops. You can’t be too careful about rumors.</p>
<p>Here are first seven poems from the jam.</p>
<p><strong>Rumors of a Blue Geography</strong></p>
<p>By <a href="http://twitter.com/llbarkat" target="_blank">@llbarkat</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/Doallas" target="_blank">@Doallas</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/kellysauer" target="_blank">@kellysauer</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/pathoftreasure" target="_blank">@pathoftreasure</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/amberleepb" target="_blank">@amberleepb</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/RachelleEaton" target="_blank">@RachelleEaton</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/@divyaasachdeva" target="_blank">@divyaasachdeva</a> and <a href="http://twitter.com/shewhodid" target="_blank">@shewhodid</a>. Retweets by <a href="http://twitter.com/wichmans" target="_blank">@wichmans</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/cathiejoy">@cathiejoy</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/shellartistree" target="_blank">@shellartistree</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/KChavda">@KChavda</a>, <a href="http://twitter.ciom/Skookum86" target="_blank">@Skookum86</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/kruss984" target="_blank">@kruss984</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/LaundryLineDiv" target="_blank">@LaundryLineDiv</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/EscapeIntoLife" target="_blank">@EscapeIntoLife</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/umeshnrao" target="_blank">@umeshnrao</a>, and <a href="http://twitter.com/CarlyRocks" target="_blank">@CarlyRocks</a>. Edited by <a href="http://twitter.com/@gyoung9751" target="_blank">@gyoung9751</a>.</p>
<p><strong>Rumors of girls in white dresses</strong></p>
<p>I&#8217;ve heard there are rumors<br />
of girls in white dresses<br />
and a woman behind a lens<br />
and a boat with no dress.<br />
Float at your own pace,<br />
fingers dangling,<br />
catching the current.<br />
If I tread the water,<br />
will it weep?<br />
And what of the woman<br />
and the white dress asleep?<br />
How will I write<br />
the white dresses<br />
and the boat<br />
and the fingers.<br />
Oh, I want to write<br />
the fingers&#8230;<br />
White moon in a white dress<br />
and me wishing for the next dance.<br />
Can a dress dance<br />
alone?<br />
And a dress:<br />
can it have wings?</p>
<p><strong>How will I write?</strong></p>
<p>How will I write<br />
how the color of your eyes<br />
falls at dusk,<br />
lighting my way?<br />
If life has no symmetry<br />
but the water has waves<br />
the color of your eyes,<br />
perhaps that is symmetry<br />
enough?</p>
<p><strong>She follows the moon</strong></p>
<p>She follows the moon<br />
and dances with the stars;<br />
her fingers disrupt,<br />
catch a wrong chord,<br />
cause disharmony.</p>
<p>She says:<br />
Catch me without disharmony<br />
catch me at the chord<br />
to the left of the little hollow<br />
at the base of my neck.<br />
Catch me alone<br />
or with a purple moth.<br />
I really don&#8217;t care<br />
how you catch me<br />
with or without cause<br />
with or without story.</p>
<p>She says:<br />
There will be a purple moth<br />
in every chapter<br />
wings bent as a page<br />
where the story waits to be<br />
picked up again.<br />
At the base of my neck<br />
you&#8217;ll find the point<br />
where our story<br />
once began.</p>
<p><strong>The fingers are playing</strong></p>
<p>The fingers are playing<br />
with keys and with strings<br />
and silk faerie strands,<br />
the touch light,<br />
as the moth&#8217;s wings<br />
the shivery slide of a nail<br />
against skin<br />
leaving me<br />
rumors of water,<br />
or the touch<br />
that echoes the wing<br />
the memory of lightness<br />
Nails, skin<br />
again storying my dress<br />
and its whiteness.</p>
<p><strong>Pan does laundry, too</strong></p>
<p>Pan could play a laundry cup;<br />
he still knows how to play.<br />
The flute is in the movement;<br />
I will follow Pan,<br />
play his notes again<br />
to echo your message written<br />
inside this laundry-soap cap<br />
you twist and turn with no effort<br />
Shivery slide,<br />
caps glide,<br />
a twist, a turn<br />
you&#8217;ll learn my message:<br />
that Pan might make music<br />
to woo us<br />
into the lightness of a bubble<br />
ascending.<br />
The cap flies, spilling words<br />
on the white-winged dress.<br />
In the bubbles<br />
we could rise and<br />
see the world<br />
through rainbow eyes.<br />
A stroke it will be<br />
dear lady<br />
to make laundry of our love;<br />
Just don&#8217;t leave me<br />
rumors of laundry.</p>
<p><strong>Spilling words</strong></p>
<p>Spilling words<br />
spilling wings<br />
all this spilling<br />
and I am ascending.<br />
Pool the letters into hands;<br />
pour them into words;<br />
drink them down.<br />
Pool the letters<br />
into my mouth<br />
and my lips will<br />
spill them sweet<br />
to you again</p>
<p><strong>Laundry love</strong></p>
<p>Love is tangled shirts<br />
the hem of a skirt<br />
caught in the brass button<br />
of your jeans.<br />
We hang it out<br />
to dry,<br />
a line of words<br />
glimmering<br />
like those rumors<br />
rising among night whispers.</p>
<p>Ascend to the moon, dear love,<br />
ascend to the moon;<br />
follow the eyes<br />
leading the way.<br />
Let them fly<br />
snapping in the wind.<br />
Laundry love on a line<br />
Ascend to the moon<br />
on a brass button;<br />
ascend the hem<br />
on a line of thread.</p>
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		<title>My Last Villanelle</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Dec 2011 16:31:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Angela Odonnell</dc:creator>
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<p><em>		With apologies to Robert Browning, Marianne Moore,<br />
		Dylan Thomas, Elizabeth Bishop, Sylvia Plath, Mother<br />
		Goose, and my readers</em></p>
<p>			I, too, dislike the villanelle,<br />
 			redundant song that tasks one’s reason,<br />
			its circuit subtle as the Bronx El.</p>
<p>			To write (or read) one hurts like hell.<br />
			It matters not which hour or season.<br />
			So I disdain the villanelle.</p>
<p>			Though I’m not one to kiss and tell<br />
			I do confess my poet’s treason<br />
			(that 3rd line’s always your Bronx El).</p>
<p>			So I cajole, try to compel<br />
			other readers: How it frees one!<br />
			Let’s just forget the villanelle! </p>
<p>			I do concede it weaves a spell,<br />
			shows poet’s grief, the drugs she’s on.<br />
			(Stand back—here comes that damnéd El!)</p>
<p>			But even so, it’s just as well<br />
			to let this snoring form sleep on.<br />
			I so despise the villanelle<br />
			relentless (listen!) as the Bronx El.</p>
<p>As this piece of homage (pottage? triage? collage?) would suggest, I have mixed feelings about the villanelle.  </p>
<p>I admire a well-executed villanelle in the same way I admire a Baroque Tromp-l’oeil ceiling—the kind that conceals corners and suggests roundness where all is square, until you stare (and stare) long enough to see the trick.  Unhappily, once the eye discovers this, it can’t be fooled any more.  But what fun the before-hand fooling is!</p>
<p>Most villanelles (let’s face it) are not well-executed.  They are heavy-handed, mechanical pieces.  Granted, the machinery may be tight, functioning properly, clicking right along.  But the poem is just that—a machine (albeit an ingenious one)—and, therefore, dead on the page.</p>
<p>These are the kinds of villanelles I write—dead ones—and I don’t know how to stop.  What do Dylan Thomas, Theodore Roethke, and Elizabeth Bishop possess that I don’t, I wonder—besides talent, a finely developed ear and eye, and impeccable technique?</p>
<p>Here, I fear, is the root of the problem.  The villanelle, alas, is not for everyone.  In fact, given the paucity of successful villanelles that exist in English—relative to successful sonnets, let’s say—it’s barely for anyone at all.</p>
<p>If poets were obstetricians, the villanelle would be their forceps—an instrument one carries in one’s bag of tricks but rarely, if ever, uses, as the results of employing it are nearly always disastrous and sometimes even fatal.</p>
<p>The villanelle should be used only under the most extreme circumstances.  Notice how nearly all of the villanelles universally admired portray terrible loss and utter and intractable grief: “Do not go gentle into that good night,” Thomas begs; “I wake to sleep and take my waking slow,” Roethke recites, automaton-like in his benumbed, post-traumatic-stress-induced state; “The art of losing isn’t hard to master,” lies Bishop’s brave and brilliant poem, which proves not only that it is hard to master losing, it is impossible.  These poets and their poems are alembics of agony.  They fairly bleed.</p>
<p>If villanelles could be bought in a package, the warning on the side might read:</p>
<p> “Highly combustible!  Do not use near open hea(r)t!”<br />
or<br />
“For professional use only.  Do not try this at home.”<br />
or<br />
“In the case of accidental composing, review repeating lines 1 and 3.  If they bore you, amputate immediately.”</p>
<p>So what is an average poet (i.e., a non-genius) like myself to do?  If a serious, heart-rending, spectacularly-executed Villanelle For The Ages lies outside my range and repertoire, what of it?  Sure, I can keep practicing at home, in private, in the dark, for the fun of it.  (As with my singing, a corollary activity, that won’t harm anyone so long as it is done in the shower with the door of the bathroom firmly closed.)</p>
<p>Just as I don’t expect to write a great villanelle, I confess, I don’t expect to read many more of them in the course of my lifetime.  But if and when I do meet one, as I have on a few very memorable occasions, I’ll be ready.  As poet Robert Hass once wrote, when one encounters a huge and magnificent monster, there is only one proper response:  “I think I’ll praise it.”  </p>
<p><strong><em>Post by <a href="http://angelaalaimoodonnell.com/" target="_blank">Angela Alaimo O&#8217;Donnell,</a> author of <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1936370352/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=217145&#038;creative=399373&#038;creativeASIN=1936370352" target="_blank">Saint Sinatra and Other Poems</a></em></strong> </p>
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		<title>A Top 10 Poetry Christmas List</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Dec 2011 15:33:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>L. L. Barkat</dc:creator>
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<p>If you are trying to be a better poet, you know that writing poetry is only half the work. <span style="font-style:italic;">Reading</span> good poetry is the other half. It is what informs your sensibilities, introduces you to new techniques, makes you jealous (in a good way) so you work even harder to find just the right images, sounds, rhythms.</p>
<p>I read a lot of poetry, because it helps me become a better poet. It also makes me a better writer in general. I also read poetry<strong> just because.</strong> For me, it is a source of enchantment, a kind of hope, a place to dream. </p>
<p>There is so much to choose from in the world of poetry, but here are a few ideas for you or a friend, this holiday season&#8230;</p>
<p>1. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0393321789?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=0393321789" target="_blank">The Making of a Poem: A Norton Anthology of Poetic Forms.</a> This is an excellent resource book and includes a lot of great classic poems, grouped by form. It&#8217;s the book my daughter Sara once stole away; she later returned with poems of her own: sonnets, pantoums, villanelles, sestinas.</p>
<p>2. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0609800981?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=0609800981" target="_blank">Poemcrazy: Freeing Your Life with Words</a> is a fun little book that will get you playing with words in new ways. </p>
<p>3. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1556592418?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=1556592418" target="_blank">The Butterfly&#8217;s Burden.</a> This collection, by a Palestinian poet, never fails to make me swoon. Take this little untitled poem for instance: <span style="font-style:italic;">The fog is darkness, thick white darkness/peeled by an orange and a promising woman. </span></p>
<p>4. Of course we recommend <a href="http://www.tweetspeakpoetry.com/blog/t-s-poetry-press/" target="_blank">any of our titles.</a> Beauty, style, unique ways of seeing the world, real voices. That&#8217;s what you can expect from a T. S. title.</p>
<p>5. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0156005662?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=0156005662" target="_blank">How to Read a Poem: And Fall in Love with Poetry.</a> Hirsch says poetry is &#8220;a secret that can no longer be kept a secret.&#8221; If you&#8217;ve wondered why and how you should read poetry, this book will give you some unexpected and delightful answers, so that maybe you&#8217;ll find yourself saying, like he does, &#8220;It always carries me away.&#8221;</p>
<p>6. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0375755209?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=0375755209" target="_blank">Nine Horses: Poems.</a> One quiet Sunday, I read this entire book of poetry to my kids. They loved it. Collins is pure grown-up, but he&#8217;s accessible at many levels. One of our favorites was about the neurotic fear of a mouse who might burn the whole house down by accidentally striking a match in the walls.</p>
<p>7. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0872864286?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=0872864286" target="_blank">The Essential Neruda: Selected Poems.</a> Neruda will teach you the power of the image. Abstract language takes a back seat to poppies, a green knife, footsteps light as flour dust. I am particularly enamored with the love poetry. Here&#8217;s an excerpt from &#8220;Twenty Love Poems, 7&#8243;: <span style="font-style:italic;">Leaning into the evenings I toss my sad nets/to that sea which stirs your ocean eyes.</span> </p>
<p>8. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1416572457/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=1416572457" target="_blank">The Anthologist</a> is one of the funniest books I&#8217;ve read. Part fictional memoir of character &#8216;Paul Chowder,&#8217; part terrific insight into the inner workings of poetry. The running story of Sara Teasdale is both fun and poignant, as is the character&#8217;s own failed love-life with Roz.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1555975623/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=seedinston-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=390957&#038;creativeASIN=1555975623" target="_blank">9. The Art of Recklessness.</a> Not an easy read, but somehow I can&#8217;t put it down. The force of Young&#8217;s voice, the liveliness and depth of his observations, and sometimes the surprisingly simple interjections (<em>no one can ruin poetry by trying to write it!</em>) make for a profound and sometimes winsome read.</p>
<p>10. <a href="https://www.facebook.com/everydaypoems?sk=info" target="_blank">Every Day Poems.</a> One of the best things I ever did for my poetry writing was to start reading a poem a day. This daily poetry delivery (weekends excluded) makes it simple, and gives me joy in the morning.</p>
<p><em><strong>Post by L.L. Barkat. Visit L.L. at <a href="http://seedlingsinstone.blogspot.com" target="_blank">Seedlings in Stone,</a> for more on writing, poetry, art and life.</em></strong></p>
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		<title>Anna of the Russias</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 14:55:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>L. L. Barkat</dc:creator>
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<p>My original title for this post: “A.A.’s Birthday.” I was shooting for catchy and mysterious, but another A.A. has bested Anna in terms of instant recognition. Still, this day is to be remembered if only because Akhmatova herself should not be forgotten.</p>
<p>Born <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anna_Akhmatova" target="_blank">Anna Andreevna Gorenko</a> in 1889 (she later took her grandmother’s name, Akhmatova), the poet survived some of the most brutal years of Russian history, but not without massive loss. Her first husband was shot for conspiring against the state. Another died in the Gulag on similar charges. Her son was repeatedly arrested, released, rearrested and ultimately freed due to Akhmatova’s perseverance (this period was the only time she wrote propagandist poetry for the state). The philosopher Isaiah Berlin wrote of Akhmatova:</p>
<p>“The widespread worship of her memory in Soviet Union today, both as an artist and as an unsurrendering human being, has, so far as I know, no parallel. The legend of her life and unyielding passive resistance to what she regarded as unworthy of her country and herself, transformed her into a figure [...] not merely in Russian literature, but in Russian history in [the Twentieth] century.”</p>
<p><a href="http://eighthdaybooks.com/index.php?p=catalog&#038;mode=search&#038;search_in=all&#038;keywords=anna+akhmatova&#038;x=0&#038;y=0&#038;parent=" target="_blank">Akhmatova’s work</a> was revolutionary in its time, “composed of short fragments of simple speech that do not form a logical coherent pattern. Instead, they reflect the way we actually think, the links between the images are emotional, and simple everyday objects are charged with psychological associations. Like Alexander Pushkin, who was her model in many ways, Akhmatova was intent on conveying worlds of meaning through precise details” (Roberta Reeder).</p>
<p>The following poem was written in March of 1944 and is part of a larger sequence entitled “Death.” It exemplifies Akhmatova’s attention to detail and scene-setting, and like the best of literature, is universal, by nature of its specificity.</p>
<p>When the moon lies like a slice of Chardush melon<br />
On the windowsill and it’s hard to breathe,<br />
When the door is shut and the house bewitched<br />
By an airy branch of blue wisteria,<br />
And there is cool water in the clay cup,<br />
And a snow-white towel, and the wax candle<br />
Is burning, as in my childhood, attracting moths,<br />
The silence roars, not hearing my words–<br />
Then from corners black as Rembrandt’s<br />
Something rears and hides itself again,<br />
But I won’t rouse myself, won’t even take fright…<br />
Here loneliness has caught me in its net.<br />
The landlady’s black cat stares like the eye of centuries,<br />
And the double in the mirror doesn’t want to  help me.<br />
I will sleep sweetly. Good night, night.</p>
<p>—translated by <a href="http://eighthdaybooks.com/index.php?p=catalog&#038;mode=search&#038;search_in=all&#038;keywords=+Judith+Hemschemeyer&#038;x=0&#038;y=0&#038;parent=0" target="_blank">Judith Hemschemeyer</a></p>
<p><em><strong>Post by <a href="http://jenniferjantzestes.wordpress.com/" target="_blank">Jennifer Jantz Estes.</a> Reprinted with permission from <a href="http://blog.eighthdaybooks.com/?p=694" target="_blank">Eighth Day Books.</a></strong></em></p>
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		<title>Stories of the Bees</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Oct 2011 17:46:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Glynn Young</dc:creator>
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<p>For our Poetry jam on Twitter in September, poet Anne Overstreet, author of the recently published <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0984553150/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=seedinston-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399373&amp;creativeASIN=0984553150 " target="_blank">Delicate Machinery Suspended: Poems</a></em>, joined us. The prompts all came from her collection. And we got into bees and moons and ants and rosaries and all manner of things. (It was great fun.) The first five poems are below.</p>
<p><strong>Stories of the Bees</strong></p>
<p>By <a href="http://twitter.com/mmerubies" target="_blank">@mmerubies</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/llbarkat" target="_blank">@llbarkat</a>, <a href="http://twitter/com/AnneDOvers" target="_blank">@AnneDOvers</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/Jeff_Overstreet" target="_blank">@Jeff_Overstreet</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/Doallas" target="_blank">@Doallas</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/SandraHeskaKing" target="_blank">@SandraheskaKing</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/lindachontos" target="_blank">@lindachontos</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/gyoung9751" target="_blank">@gyoung9751</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/poetryinabottle" target="_blank">@poetryinabottle</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com.rosanneosborne" target="_blank">@rosanneosborne</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/togetherforgood" target="_blank">@togetherforgood</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/LoveLifeLitGod" target="_blank">@LoveLifeLitGod</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/strangejkp" target="_blank">@strangejkp</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/quietlybananas" target="_blank">@quietlybananas</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/mrsmetaphor" target="_blank">@mrsmetaphor </a>and <a href="http://twitter.com/dthaase" target="_blank">@dthaase</a>. Edited by <a href="http://twitter.com/gyoung9751" target="_blank">@gyoung9751</a>.</p>
<p><strong>Honey-braided shadows</strong></p>
<p>The sun braided shadows in my hair;<br />
the shadows braided memories,<br />
memories of slivered light and<br />
honey-baked hair, honey-combed<br />
highlights in my hair, baking<br />
shadows into nets, catching my heart.</p>
<p>The bumbles braid a choir with honey bees.<br />
It is a silly thing, my fear of bees. So small,<br />
couldn&#8217;t really hurt me, right? But the bright<br />
yellow buzz scares. They enter, they leave;<br />
I can never keep track of their unlined path,<br />
this unlined path stretching before my feet.</p>
<p>I’m eager yet afraid to follow the hum<br />
of the bees to the braided sunlight.<br />
The bees rise to braided rows of roses<br />
that for the shivering had not even opened<br />
their eyes. The path I left behind me is lined<br />
with broken pieces, where I jumped too soon.</p>
<p><strong>Bees and yellow jackets</strong></p>
<p>Yellow jackets like nets cast<br />
marked each step. The vibration<br />
of the hive enfolded his hand;<br />
the energy, transferred, traced<br />
red lines in his palm, enfolding<br />
his face, hive-warm, light-combed.<br />
The vibration of the bees enfolded<br />
his heart, the lines in his hands<br />
between heaven and hive.<br />
The lines of bees enter the heart<br />
of the flowers, carrying away<br />
the sweetness. These days are<br />
my hive. This man, with his tongue<br />
heavy with honey, wipes a drop<br />
at the corner of his mouth.<br />
He can never love another.<br />
She will smell my scent on his skin,<br />
where the honey-love stained his flesh.</p>
<p><strong>The song of the bees</strong></p>
<p>The song taken up,<br />
his heart fills, keeping<br />
to the beat of wings,<br />
sending messages<br />
of hope they speak<br />
with dance of wings.<br />
The struck strings<br />
of bee hum the path<br />
of nectar to my mouth.<br />
Honey, I strum.</p>
<p><strong>The Queen arrives</strong></p>
<p>The Queen arrives, her throne embellished<br />
with sticky sweetness of love. In the winter<br />
the Queen sleeps; in Spring she wakes<br />
to blossoms, and swans. The workers rush<br />
to serve; she answers with beating wing.<br />
The hive’s a frenzy in the seasons of blossoms,<br />
the Queen&#8217;s guard on watch.<br />
If this is my hive am I the Queen Bee or<br />
just a drone mindlessly working?<br />
I choose to be Queen Bee. I will woo<br />
the worker and feed him my honey soft words.<br />
My love will cling to him like syrup.</p>
<p>Is it so bad to be the mindless drone<br />
gathering nectar from flowers braided<br />
with spun sunlight?</p>
<p><strong>Tiny weavers</strong></p>
<p>Tiny weavers of petaled cloth,<br />
The bees’ rhythms are heard only<br />
by petaled ears. My mind touches<br />
the memory of bees at work.<br />
Mindlessly I trace my memories,<br />
shadows silking an amber past.</p>
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		<title>The Kingdom Comes II</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Aug 2011 10:00:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Glynn Young</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here are the next six poems taken from our recent TweetSpeak Poetry jam on Twitter. All the prompts were lines from Kingdom Come: Poems by John Estes. The Kingdom Comes II By @llbarkat, @SandraHeskaKing, @gyoung9751, @jestes, @Doallas, @jejpoet, @CeliaNickel1, @togetherforgood, @PensieveRobin, @kellysauer, @sethhaines, @theeagleacademy, @mdgoodyear, and @elizabethesther. Edited by @gyoung9751. I sailed a galleon, a [...]]]></description>
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<p>Here are the next six poems taken from our recent TweetSpeak Poetry jam on Twitter. All the prompts were lines from <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Kingdom-Come-John-Estes/dp/1936196026/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1313852489&amp;sr=1-1 " target="_blank">Kingdom Come: Poems</a></em> by John Estes.</p>
<p><strong>The Kingdom Comes II</strong></p>
<p>By <a href="http://twitter.com/llbarkat" target="_blank">@llbarkat</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/SandraHeskaKing" target="_blank">@SandraHeskaKing</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/gyoung9751" target="_blank">@gyoung9751</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/jestes" target="_blank">@jestes</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/doallas" target="_blank">@Doallas</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/jejpoet" target="_blank">@jejpoet</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/CeliaNickel1" target="_blank">@CeliaNickel1</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/togetherforgood" target="_blank">@togetherforgood</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/PensieveRobin" target="_blank">@PensieveRobin</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/kellysauer" target="_blank">@kellysauer</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/sethhaines" target="_blank">@sethhaines</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/theeagleacademy" target="_blank">@theeagleacademy</a>, <a href="http://twitter.com/mdgoodyear" target="_blank">@mdgoodyear</a>, and <a href="http://twitter.com/elizabethesther" target="_blank">@elizabethesther</a>. Edited by <a href="http://twitter.com/gyoung9751" target="_blank">@gyoung9751</a>.</p>
<p><strong>I sailed a galleon, a tree</strong></p>
<p>I sailed a galleon upon the sea,<br />
I sailed a galleon, once a tree.<br />
The tree&#8217;s the bed we&#8217;ll go to nest;<br />
Its ancient wisdom offers rest .</p>
<p>We shall rest under ancient trees<br />
to ponder the echoes that rise<br />
over time, like those same ancient trees,<br />
winding wisdom instead of lies.</p>
<p>The tree is the bed; that&#8217;s what she said.<br />
We sit in our tree-bed, reaching for nests<br />
of glass; when the wings are just right<br />
and just ready, we break the nest<br />
like hatching chicks.</p>
<p>This timber cannot be mined for wood;<br />
This tree cannot be hollowed to float.<br />
I try to keep up with moss<br />
that grows too quickly, clouds<br />
that change into three ships sailing.</p>
<p><strong>Mad men like fools</strong></p>
<p>I look for mad men who, like fools<br />
rave and read the river, follow its clues.<br />
Some rivers smile, and some weep,<br />
but the best of them laugh at feet,<br />
clues clinging to toes until we itch<br />
inside river-wet socks.</p>
<p>The rocks rise, bald caps before<br />
the river&#8217;s blade carves time<br />
in sandstone, molding sandstone<br />
nests to hold the river. Canyon walls<br />
swallow tears while trees float<br />
down the laughing river</p>
<p>A river flows new every time.<br />
A river laughs new every time.</p>
<p><strong>Stitches</strong></p>
<p>From stitched together stories<br />
we weave a narrative. Stitches<br />
and laughter bind up our wounds;<br />
rivers of laughter bring healing.<br />
Stitches, or itches, slide<br />
between measured spaces<br />
where the needle went down.<br />
How do they tickle; how do we<br />
laugh back? Oh and we laugh<br />
and we laugh and we call it stitches.<br />
We laugh until the pain pines away;<br />
through the eye of the needle we pass.</p>
<p><strong>The Northern Lights</strong></p>
<p>The northern lights glow<br />
like broken glow sticks;<br />
the northern lights grow<br />
like arainbow sky-glass.<br />
We pass through<br />
the northern lights.<br />
We pass through.<br />
Don&#8217;t peek between<br />
the blinds, throw them<br />
open, inhale the lights.<br />
Oh don&#8217;t close the shade,<br />
let the northern lights in,<br />
let the northern lights come in.</p>
<p><strong>Plastic we shape</strong></p>
<p>Plastic we shape to fit our need:<br />
the curve of an eye, the point of a nose.<br />
Plastic is molded in stainless forms.<br />
The potter molds the plastic, heats</p>
<p>and shapes the form of the rounded<br />
hip of the sleek Cadillac. Infinity is</p>
<p>curved, and it may be plastic: mold me<br />
with your plastic hand, and I will speak</p>
<p>nothing to the curve of your emptiness.<br />
In your hand I take the shape of plastic.</p>
<p>Sharp is the edge of plastic bent and<br />
broken, a shiv to finish the work.</p>
<p>Plastic cracks with laughter, splintering<br />
percussion glass that never gets burned.</p>
<p>I hear the sound of plastic bursting,<br />
plastic laughing, plastic melting.</p>
<p>If I water plastic seeds with plastic<br />
water , will plastic sprout and grow?</p>
<p><strong>The river’s voice</strong></p>
<p>Faith finds me here, under a tree.<br />
Along the river, I hear God.<br />
Are we the camel then, finding<br />
our faith not so rich as we thought<br />
we might be? Is He laughing then,<br />
with the river&#8217;s voice, asking us<br />
to laugh along the river with Him?<br />
He is speaking silently, wishing,<br />
wanting for me to find Him.<br />
I think perhaps He is a laughing<br />
river and weeping waterfall<br />
altogether laughing and weeping<br />
with us.</p>
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