May 302010

Two weeks ago, we played a slow version of T. S. Poetry that lasted all day. We told people we were aiming to crowd source some sonnets, and I made up the dumb name of “exploding ninja poetry.” 13 people submitted 57 lines to the game, likely because it was new, and we even had John Poch, the editor of 32 Poems Magazine, drop in with a few lines.

The rules were simple, but more structured than other games we’ve played here.

1. Tweet 1-3 lines of poetry at a time throughout the day (using slash marks / to indicate line breaks).

2. End your lines with the following words, or words that rhyme with them:

wine, bread, work, hope, car

3. Each line should be 10-15 syllables roughly to approximate iambic pentameter. (This about 35-45 characters in twitter).

Here are two Italian sonnets mined from the lines you all submitted:

Courtship
by @jpoch @mdgoodyear @papagoodyear
@togetherforgood @llbarkat @denadyer @mattpriour
edited by @mdgoodyear

I like the ancient miracle of wine;
because this slightly dizzy thirst, this hope
goes untested, accepted like olive oil soap
poured on my head and shoulders and spine.
All the crap goes away, eaten by mold and time,
And guitar sermons of mirrors and smoke
and pollen turned to toxic seeds of rope.
Gas us up with lead until our fuel lines
blacken, tighten, chocking each hose with char
happy harbinger of life after life after death
Orange cigarette butts, smashed cans by the curb
We will not find love by wishing on stars
but in this Merlot, lips at the sweet edge
All of us hoping, praying the offering works.

Body and Blood
by @KathleenOverby @mdgoodyear @JavaNicky @llbarkat @jpoch
@TchrEric @denadyer @JavaNicky @CherylRicker @gyoung9751
edited by @mdgoodyear

Bread is so sweet we spread butter or brine.
The first time through I thought I’d misread—
even the best magic turns gold into lead.
As evening sun reflects off glasses of wine,
find a red grape, clinging ripe to a vine.
No. Flour, water, salt, the old book said
then out of the oven pops hot crusty bread.
Your voice purple sweet sounds rose-petal fine
then the bread and the wine fulfill this whole trope
pour out our faith and all our twisted works.
We toast, we nibble, we nurture grafting scars.
Then feverishly feast and drain our cups of hope.
The bitter tannins leave us dizzy with thirst,
two sullen elect who pray, “Not too far.”

Special thanks to all who participated! If you want to try your hand at editing our lines into your own sonnet, we posted all of submitted lines sorted by poet and rhyme word at Tweet Speak Sonnets – May 2010. If you take a stab at it, be sure to post your poem online and send us a link!

Posted by Marcus Tagged with: , , , ,
May 282010

Tuesday’s poetry jam on Twitter was designed to be a celebration of the launch of Marcus Goodyear’s new book of poems, Barbies at Communion: and other poems. A celebration it certainly was. We had a record number of participants – 21 in all at various points in the hour-long jam. Even Papa Goodyear, Marcus’ dad, paid a visit.

Like all celebrations, it was noisy, happy and wild.

And we learned some things from Marcus the poet, like Barbie the Episcopal priest has a Facebook page (@mmerubies found the news story about the ordination); there is a Barbie foosball game; there’s a Barbie rat race car artwork, and it’s for sale; and you can even put Barbie on the menu.

The first group of poems are below.

The Barbie Poems 1

By @mdgoodyear, @papagoodyear, @llbarkat, @memoriaarts, @arestlessheart, @lauraboggess, @cascheller, @mattpriour, @PoemsPrayers, @KathleenOverby, @togetherforgood, @gyoung9751, @mmerubies, @jamesrls, @doallas, @Dancinbutterfly, @moondustwriter, @mxings, @Jezamama, @MarisaLopezzz, and @TchrEric; cameo appearances by @hiscrivener and @duane_scott; edited by @gyoung9751.

Barbies Excitement Builds: Prelude

Is it Tuesday yet?
Is tonight the night?
Tonight’s the night: poetry jam.
Ready for some #tsptry.
Okay, where’s the barbie-q?
Barbie’s Ken better be wearing
hockey goalie gear tonight.

Barbie a priest? Episcopal priest?
Does Priest Barbie A) empower
women in ministry B) glorify
God as a work of liturgical art or
C) highlight God’s sense of humor?
I dunno what Priest Barbie does,
but can I have her?

i brought my poet Barbie.
They’re smart enough for poetry?
Barbies is an interesting topic.
I want to stay but I need to go.
But If you leave, who’ll represent
Ken? I’ve never been compared
to Ken before.

Barbie, Barbie, Barbie. That’s all
I ever hear! Why does Barbie get
all the new clothes? Why does
Barbie have great curves? Because
the little girls can’t be princesses
themselves, they dress their girls
in their dreams.

She always had the best hair, too,
till my friend Krissy ratted it all up.
Doesn’t she know that’s impossible
to attain? Not that you should be
bitter about Barbies you had twenty
years ago but it’s possible
I still am.

Shocking Pink Barbie

What kind of distinctive art
genre would
the artists make of me?
Drinking green tea,
writing shocking pink poetry?
Mom would not buy
me a Ken doll, to offset the
shocking pink, so I chopped
off a blonde doll’s hair and
shocked that way.
I am green with envy, or
is it pink with shock?

Shocking pink, lime green,
dutifully shocking, whatever
you want — leaves no room
for tea. Green tea can sometimes
be bitter without a touch of clover
honey. I wonder if Barbie had a jar
beneath the Dior beyond the heels.
I cut her hair off; fit of anger:
she perfect pink,
me black and blue.
Barbie wore Dior?
Shock is never bitter, honey.

Barbies Dating

At the time, it did not mean
anything to me, to have my dolls,
dating. I imagined short-hair-girl
had become a man. We never
bothered to date, just hopped
naked around the room singing
dance tunes.
I closed my eyes and pretended
she came alive, at night, while I
was dreaming in my bed.
My sister’s life-sized Barbie wrestled
us to the ground, pinched our waists
until we cried uncle, dreamed of
ladders with angels.
Even as a small child, my Barbies
were already having sex. I hope my
children are more innocent than that.

Barbies Dissected

She smelled distinctly of pink jello and ink.
What would it be like to eat pink
jello vicariously,poised on heels
that never flatten into real life,
toned muscled arms
torn from sockets?
Resilient, they snapped back.
My husband dissected his sister’s Barbies
and pushed Barbie and Ken down the stairs
in the dream car. I lost my head; Ken had
such beautiful eyes but his voice squeaked.
Anatomically incorrect, as the world knows.
Is she ever clothed? Pass the scalpel, it’s time
to slice the plastic, pop off heads, there’s got to
be some life in her torso.

Posted by Glynn Young
May 262010

We had our poetry jam on Twitter last night, and this time we did a kind of “event” around Marcus Goodyear’s newly published collection, Barbies at Communion: and other poems. So, yes, it was a Barbie-themed party, and it was wild.

For the last three poetry jams, we’ve been featuring a new “tool” or Twitter application developed by Matt Priour. You can see it at the main TweetSpeak URL. You log in under your Twitter account, and then post in the designated box. Poetry jam prompts appear in the box above the tweeting box.

Electronically, what happens is this: you log in, you enter a tweet and hit the tweet button, and then the application sends the tweet to the Twitter data base (a kind of “registration process”) and then back out again to the posted tweets list. It can take up to 10 seconds to complete the process. While you’re waiting, other tweets are appearing, you respond with a new one – and, as you might imagine, the pace can get frantic and you can easily lose your way.

But you don’t have to use the tool (we call it TweetSpeak Party); you can use Twitter, HootSuite, TweetDeck or any other similar application, and your tweets are included as long as you include the #tsptry hashtag with your tweets.

I used TweetSpeak Party exclusively last night. And while the 10-second delay could be perplexing, with poetic contributions streaming in and from all directions, I found myself focusing on a few and then following and responding to those. A few participants had trouble with the tool, and then trying to keep track of everything with other applications like HootSuite or TweetDeck. I was also watching the tweets via TweetDeck, and found a few that weren’t showing up in the TweetSpeak Party posting box (although they all did show up in the data base Matt created to collect all of the tweets – 1,080 tweets strong). And a few had some technical trouble with either TweetSpeak Party or their regular Twitter application.

Matt’s been working on a new application, one that can be independent of Twitter or other applications and happen within the framework of TweetSpeak Poetry itself. We’ll keep you up-to-date on progress.

Now the hard part starts – the editing of the tweets into poems. The process itself deserves its own blog post, but what essentially happens is this: I read through all of the tweets as a group several times. I then highlight what are obviously related tweets. Those are copied and pasted into a Word document, then worked over to fit them with each other in what can range from 15 to 35 poems. This usually happens over a period of about a week.

For the Barbie poems, I’ll have an introduction, which will include the usual pre-party online discussion and a couple of links provided by the poet/author himself to inspire the participants. Although I’m not sure how inspirational Barbie Enchiladas actually are.

Related:

Kindle and print versions of Barbies at Communion are available via Amazon. You can also order a print copy signed by the author via Paypal, linked from the book’s web page.

Want to party with the poems all the time? Take a button, if you like…

barbies button

Posted by Glynn Young Tagged with: , , ,
May 242010

barbies cover

One day, Marcus Goodyear was sitting at Communion; his daughter was playing with Barbies while the bread passed. That moment turned into the marvelous poem “Barbies at Communion.”

Did Marcus ever think this simple moment would eventually find its way to a book cover, indeed a whole book of terrific poetry? Yet, here we are.

At Tweetspeak, we’re so pleased that the poetry of many ordinary moments— turned clever, beautiful and often philosophical— are now available in print. So pleased, in fact, that we’re going to give away a signed copy of Marcus’s debut poetry book Barbies at Communion.

We’re also asking you to write about the Barbies in your life and link to our Giveaway post. Stories, memories, weird pictures, fun poems… anything goes. Just drop your link here, and we’ll link back to you. You might even get featured at Tweetspeak or HighCallingBlogs. Let the fun begin!

To enter the giveaway, comment on this post anytime between now and 11 pm EST on Thursday, June 3.

YOUR POSTS:
nAncY’s pink
LL’s Pretend Your Blog is a Barbie
Maureen’s See Me Let Me Be Me Barbies
Erin’s Construction Zone
Glynn’s Song Has Not Been Heard
Bradley’s The Bad Business of Being Barbie
Kelly’s Little Girls and Their Dreams: a Post About Barbies
Cassandra’s Pink
Heather’s Dear Barbie
Laura’s For the Toy Box
Katdish’s Special Barbies
Billy’s Father, Daughter, Barbie and Ken
Melissa’s don’t ask
Cheryl’s Barbies, Poetry, and Community
Karl’s Must-Read Barbies
Charity’s Barbies at Communion
LL’s Communion
Nichole’s Memorial Day at the Mall
Stephie’s She Wanted a Barbie
Eve’s Barbie and Me
A Simple Country Girl’s From the Mouth of Barbie
Monica’s Things in Common
Erica’s Reflections on Barbie, her frumpy aunt, and Sunshine eyeballs

Posted by L. L. Barkat
May 192010

The final eight poems from last week’s poetry jam on Twitter are below.

Poems of Complication 4

By @mdgoodyear, @llbarkat, @PoemsPrayers, @mxings, @togetherforgood, @cascheller, @mmerubies, @MonicaSharman, @DancinButterfly, @thegypsymama, @TchrEric and @KathleenOverby. Not to mention @shrinkingcamel. Edited by @glynn_poet.

Tattooed Tears

My tears are tattooed to me; I wear
them well, flex for all to see my
mother’s passing. I am sitting by
the shut gate, and you are in there
somewhere. Come out and play with me.

Cushion your grief with lavender; the
scent of it weighs purple in the garden,
drifts your loss over the stones.
This is play, the sound of you breathing
beyond the wall.

Or tucked, yes, in one’s garden beneath
earth, bricks and stone. stones don’t leave;
they filter tears running a river.
I hear you breathing beyond the wall.
(I hear you breathing beyond the wall.)

Word Feast

I am a glutton for good words. I gobble
them and would hoard for later but there
are rarely leftovers .

What I love about eating words is there is
always more to eat, and I cannot become
fat with poetry.

Good words smell of lavender. Good truths
taste of bitter ale and make a hectic path for
a runaway heart, fat with love.

Poetry is good for the heart, much like
South African wine. I treat my homesickness
with both.

I didn’t know you were from South Africa.
It is my home, my compass, my true South.
I am gypsy.

Not poet but form, the gypsy’s life is in the street.
Gypsies sell poetry to the highest bidder, shill tales
of foreign lands for food.

He cannot hear, seeking food from gypsies
who’ve taken his senses, in return for honey
mead or ale to sip in secret.

Call me troubadour and I will happily sing for you
the love song of my motherland, homesick for
the street of dreams.

Which Poet Was It?

Shoot. Who said that? Keats. No. Someone else.
The lavender has stolen my mind.
No, Keats! It was Keats.
Who eulogized him? Shelly. Shelley?
Percy, tells us the secrets of this night,
secrets stuffed in pockets and bags,
between my toes and my teeth.
I will taste the truths between your teeth,
but the ones in your toes are all yours.
You may be poor; I am poorer, never having
guessed the poet.
It was Keats.
No, Lowell. But I know not the form.

What is an Ode?

Odes. Odes? What is an ode?
I once wrote a poem about an urn,
non-Grecian, but was it an ode?
I do not know.
I know this non-Grecian urn of
which you speak. They said it was
gold, but the gold is a myth.
Leaden lies need space.
Space, punctuate me with your
Breath that would be enough
and more.

One That Almost Rhymes

Will you write a pretty ode for me,
take it and give it by the sea?
Do we write for those we cannot see?
In a swell of words, we’re lost at sea.
Is it not Ode? Why do you tease me?
If you please sir, write an ode to me.
Speak your thoughts; write them all over me.
It’s Ode, it’s Ode. I wait the finis.
For truth, my prompt is stuck in the sea,.
beautiful life boat stuck in the sea.
Your cushion will float an awkward boat
In the event of catastrophe.

Walking in Beauty

I have always wanted to walk in beauty,
like the night. I walk in the night, but what
beauty there might be cannot be seen.
is it so for thee?
And I went, seeking food, seeking sight,
seeking youth, seeking night,
completely turned around, surrounded
by trees and the dark,
finding only colors of cloud blue and black,
bruised with blood red.
We are but poor players, strutting our
colors for the egos of others.

Lost Rosary Beads

With this surge of words, these traveling words
to make music and lyrics, I mourn the three beads
of the rosary poem lost. Yet romantics show up in
the most common places, or the strangest;
you never can tell.

Political Socio-Economics

Others can reach, they can and do, the political and
societal implications of capitalism and landfills and
bulk shopping. Not one blotch is ever overlooked.
It is easier to be poor than it is to be middle class,
some days. Poor is a state of mind; just look at the rich.

My friend said, today, that money doesn’t matter.
What matters is strength. Am I strong enough to let
this wash over me?
Here are my shoes. Walk a mile in the ones that gave
me blisters .

A friend gave me mint lotion to rub behind my ears
today, like God had kissed me there. It might work
for blisters, too. If it does, then gobbets of penitents
will find their way.
What did I say? Which untruth do you speak of?

Posted by Glynn Young Tagged with: ,
May 182010

Below are seven additional poems based on the tweets from last Tuesday’s poetry jam on Twitter.

Poems of Complication 3

By @mdgoodyear, @llbarkat, @PoemsPrayers, @mxings, @togetherforgood, @cascheller, @mmerubies, @MonicaSharman, @DancinButterfly, @thegypsymama, @TchrEric and @KathleenOverby. Not to mention @shrinkingcamel. Edited by @glynn_poet.

The Moon Goodess and the Man in the Moon

It shall be a game with fluff and
pulp and the moon goddess in the
rain. If the moon danced a jig
would she spill wine like words
down the back of her skirt?
No, not down the back of my
skirt, not now… I can’t reach that far.
I am stained. The red wine is all over
me in intricate patterns. Will you stay
despite my stains?

If she fell , the man in the moon would
catch her with his wan hands and hopeful
eyes. The man in the moon is overlooked.
We are blinded by bright sun and forget
that he will burn us to our cores.
Trapped between my own quotation
marks, glowing like the moon, now waning,
now giving way to a dawn of
not one shade, not one hue,
not one slice of the moon.

The Grief of Famous Poets

All that I thought would come is
now decomposing. I will have to
rebuild. I will have to rebuild.
Milton?
Keats, Hopkins, Tolkien.
Tolkien?
(Italy.)
( Italy?)
Sidney. Sir Philip? Shakespeare.
Shakespeare? Who quoth thee
beneath the shoulder of the moon
tonight?
But Horace stuffs his grief beneath
Tolkien and Keats. I stuff my grief
under the lavender in the herb
garden by the little silver stones.
I stuff my grief into words
scattered on pages, tapped into
computers, spoken over the phone.
I stuff my grief under Psalms and
between the strong lines of Isaiah 61.
And you?
Where do you stuff your grief?
I have forgotten the place of stuffing,
but it cushions my seat.
Browning. Browning?
Milton stuffed grief into serpents,
bit Eve’s lip with his ink. I do not hide
my grief; I write it on my arms, living poetry
a testament to my story.

I Want to Meet Nikki Giovanni

I want to meet Nikki Giovanni and write
new words with her. I want her to
write her poetry all over me.
Forget Nikki; you have rainbowed friends
in Oregon, New York, Texas. They will
write poetry all over because we praise the
things that are not here, the lost, the
washed, the legal briefs.
I fear I have not read the poet who speaks
of rainbows. I have not trailed my skirt
in his ink. (Or is it hers?)

A Rainbow in Tupelo

Last week, a full rainbow formed over the
houses here in Tupelo. I thought of running
for the gold, but I have a treasure already.
I have never seen a house in Tupelo, never
wrung my skirt of the moonlight under its trees.
I stopped in Tupelo to visit the king, he was not
There, and I have lost my map. I have lost the
street, even the horses feet.
Oh, the King is alive in Tupelo. It says so on the
building downtown, three miles from his birthplace.
He’s arrogant as ever, sideburns scattered down
his jaw; they are not one whit wise.
So I moved on to Memphis for a brief glimpse of
grace, got lost, and found Graceland.

The Grace I Have Received

We know not our fate and yet we strive,
sailing tumultuous seas, each in search of
the great white whale.

You are not allowed to march back into
my life and be as important as you once
were. Serve me up a splash of something
hot, fried, covered in sticky poems and
whispered pauses. Had your way, you
would have traced your issues all over
my body in black thick strokes of needles
and ink, the ink speaking 1000 words on
each shoulder.

I am sick unto death of serving two masters,
three masters, many more masters than I can
count or keep accountable to. Instead, God
wrote His word on me. He called me, He called
me beauty. He gave me beauty for my ashes.
He replaced you with the crown of a faithful
loving husband. His love is inked around my
ankle in visible strokes and written on my heart
in the way it matters most.

I am stained and smeared, my colors bleed with
rainbow tears. Come Lord Jesus, come and take
my stains away. I am sick to death of loving them.
In Christ there are only two colors, blood and snow,
I paint in both, and we are, each day, painted in
both, offering up to grace. Here are my hands and
here is my heart, I am ready for your words to be
written there. I am tired of my own.

Refresh the screen, relive the lines, remember the
words of life and grime. I want to be a walking
testimony to the grace I have received.

Weaving with Sand

Someone weaves with sand. We hold our
breath while the sun is setting on this sand
and sea, the sea or a mirage shimmering
gold late in the season. Time is running like
sand, unless you by some magic can weave it into beauty, as
sand weaves through an hour glass, through the glass in hand;
like a soap opera, so are we the days of our lives.
These pictures of sand and soap tell me nothing; you are
wasting my time.
Perhaps, yes.

Blue Jogging Shorts

Time wears blue jogging shorts and runs at a quiet clip
down the suburban street at dawn. Time is in better
shape than I, clip clopping down the street.
I can dance, I can tap, I can jig, I can jog like
a laptop love letter. My feet and my fingers
dance their parenthetical tattoo, 50-yard-dashed
across miles.

Posted by Glynn Young Tagged with: ,
May 162010

Following are eight poems from last Tuesday’s poetry jam on twitter, ranging from plainness and fresh strawberries to a celebration of punctuation.

Poems of Complication 2

By @mdgoodyear, @llbarkat, @PoemsPrayers, @mxings, @togetherforgood, @cascheller, @mmerubies, @MonicaSharman, @DancinButterfly, @thegypsymama, @TchrEric and @KathleenOverby. Not to mention @shrinkingcamel. Edited by @glynn_poet.

Plainness

I saw two plain women today.
One of them chatted on her
cell, a bulky older phone, while
having lunch with her family.

Say no apologies for plainness,
for soft blanket country days and
the reminiscing of what happened
between him and her.

Ah, but the magic in the hands
offering sleights; shyness, plainness,
misdirection of reality.
Even glazed is too glazed to be plain.

Fresh Strawberries

From the garden of the countryside
you brought fresh-picked strawberries,
looking small in your large brown hands.
Bring them to the kitchen and rinse them
in the large white sink.

Strawberries sound good, rinsed cold,
dusted with sugar fed to me on a blanket
under a tree. I like them plain with just a
hint of sugar. But I don’t like to be fed.
It sounds romantic, but I just feel silly in
the moment of the feeding.

Being fed is not romantic till twelve years
later, remembering him throwing fruit
loops into your mouth. Babies don’t mind
the colored spoons, but I mind. I do.
You do?

Straight Shots

Straight shots, have not met one of those,
at least not after a hard day followed
by tequila.
Make it a double,
true love, on the rocks, double shot, top me off
and then give me yet another shot.
You loved wizards and heavy metal
music that felt like the very blood in
my body was suddenly pumping into
yours.
I’ll take another one, on the rocks.

Fairy Tales

I am dreaming of a Cinderella life, where
I wake up to a fairy godmother with a magic
wand and she touches my feet with crystal.
Douse me in Tolkien, take me by your magic
Wand to lands of hobbits, commas, quotes.
Cinderella was lost in her own head;
broken day dreams are a drag to sweep up
and another and another and sweep and sweep.
Princes are unpredictable, except the
Rumplestiltskin father, asleep in the arm chair,
mumbling.
I wait for a King.
He has come searching for me.
He knows my foot size.

Food from the Table

Food from the table falling to the
cursed dirt where hard soil hosts
scant grass. I am falling off your table.
You made a meal of me. I am crumbs
now. I am barely even crumbs, yet
wide as the cheese loaf, brown as a
beach bum. I don’t want to be doused
in cheese, I must say, although I have
nothing against cheese. Cheese?
perhaps that rings true; is old, a bit
gangly, with a beard and mold.

If fed, I bite; it is an impulse. My habits
are not easily broken.
If you insist on frying me up and eating
me hot, at least use the extra virgin
olive oil, evaporated, condensated, at least.
To eat me, you must start with my words as
appetizer. No, that would have me slipping
off to warm thoughts of soft blankets.
First she simmered and then he fried.

Add plenty of butter to the heat before
you throw me in. And sprinkle the water so
it bubbles and pops.
And as for being fried,
well, no thanks.

The Punctuation is a Clue

Drifting like this, I sometimes miss
my lines, and yours, every cue.
Keep trying. The punctuation is a clue.
ee cummings didn’t like punctuation;
I like a little stop and go now
and then.

But I tire of quotes, of snow
and tyrant prompts that keep secrets
in semi-colons. Commas keep me from
poetry, hold me in limbo, keep me from
going where I want to go.

Not semi-colons, but quotation marks,
flanking the moon like wings. I like the
swirly dashes that I do not know the name
for. They pause you prettily. Butter me with
commas, little spoons that flip pale sweet
fat over my elbows, kiss my nose.

And yet commas offer that
ever needed pregnancy; allowing the soul
time to contemplate.
Words feed into the machine, and tildes
and dunes of ampersands that burn the
soles of bare feet.

Sand: can you scoop it with a comma, can
you wear it like a sweet tattoo in semi-colon seas?
Dip a comma down into my body and
dig out the breath of the moment. I am well oiled
and the wind is blowing the sand into my hair.
Ahab didn’t understand the comma;
only the harpoon and the taste of blood salt.

And so we write a love song to punctuation.
My English teachers would be so proud over
me in colons like the chicken pox epidemic
of ’99. Punctuation is overrated, a stop-gap in
conversation. Better to dive right into the verse.
But I like the hard angry sound of a
sharp-wielded backslash.

I always add the punctuation afterward,
once the words are poured out: how do I love
thee? I love thee with the breath of commas
and little dashes traced upon your chin
by candlelight.
Heavy sigh. I am lost, dashed against rocks — oh,
I am found again at high tide.

For Emily Dickinson

After reading Dickinson in middle school, I
was overcome by the desire to dash every
line to pieces. Dickinson must have walked
along the sea, dipped her toes in high tide,
stepped lightly.
I was Dickinson once, in drama class. She
and I were nobody—together.
Oh, you? You are nobody too?
That makes three of us, I know.
We shall have our own TV show. You, me
and Emily.

Which Sun? Or the Moon?

The South Texas sun, tyrant, keeps
every flake at bay.
Some days, I dream my worries have
evaporated with the scalding sun on
the hot hard sidewalk.

The Iowa sun refuses to shine, allowing
snow even in May.
I want to be the moon that the sun reflects.
The moon—Diana, or was it some other
woman who glowed by quotation nights?

Oh I love that, your Diana trapped between
the stars, the moon and her own quotation
marks.
That is when the magic begins.

Posted by Glynn Young Tagged with: ,
May 142010

Below are the first group of poems coming from our poetry jam on Twitter this past Tuesday.

The prompts, courtesy of @mdgoodyear, came from lines from the following: “The Quaker Graveyard in Nantucket” by Robert Lowell; “Ode to the West Wind” by Percy Bysshe Shelley; “Ode to the Confederate Dead” by Allen Tate; “Ode on Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood” by William Wordsworth; Ode I. 11 by Horace; and “Home Movies: A Sort of Ode” by Mary Jo Salter.

Poems of Complication

By @mdgoodyear, @llbarkat, @PoemsPrayers, @mxings, @togetherforgood, @cascheller, @mmerubies, @MonicaSharman, @DancinButterfly, @thegypsymama, @TchrEric and @KathleenOverby. Not to mention @shrinkingcamel. Edited by @glynn_poet.

Counting on Fingers

Sometimes when turning to
catch a glimpse, he would stop
and begin counting on his fingers,
past cloud and food, past fingers
counted and thumbs opposable,
stop to catch, stop him by clouds,
count his fingers, put them to your
ears or between us especially when
one switches from fingers to toes and
back again.

It’s Complicated

Really, really like this story
of him and her
of what happened
of clouds and how
thumbs entwined. We entwined
not just thumbs but lives and
hearts and forevers.

What happened between us is a
complicated story, complicated like
my dogs panting in the back yard,
accidentally biting me instead of rope.
And what is complicated weaves a
single thread through the spool of
our being.

Starts simple, with boy meets girl and
boy wants girl and girl really really really
wants boy. She sits in the corner alone.
They meet in a wine bar. She is a waitress;
he, cooling off from a tough day at the office.
He watches, turns over a phrase in his head.
And, then, discards it like a bad bottle of wine.

There is no bad bottle, only drink mature
enough to cook and simmer.
She is simmering,
shimmering in a
resplendent uniform of hot grays
and muted pinks. They come from
opposite sides of the tracks.

Oh, dark-haired dark-eyed boy. You did a
real number on me, didn’t you?
Locked me up in my stone tower and
tossed the key away. I don’t really
want to talk about it, but
speak to me in shades of merlot;
I will listen love swallow.

Sex is sex is sex, but love was sleep.
Just you, and me, and dreams; wanting
to love in spite of what others think.
It was how you looked when you
were asleep, my dark-eyed boy.
Your lashes touched your cheeks.
Your skin was soft.

You had some unknowable power in
your hands, in each one of your
fingers, as they would slide across
my skin. Some things are complicated
but dancing amid flowers in May
is simple. What is simple quickly
becomes complicated, don’t you see?

I would whimper as the fight melted
underneath your touch, and I forgot
why I wanted to leave again.

Browsing Poetry at the Bookstore

Dogs panting in the town bookstore,
drooling over Eliot, Williams.
Toss away the bookstore key,
hold me between Whitman and the
soft simmer of Teasdale and
Salter and Hayes and Eavan and Keats.

Take me back to simplicity. You would
read my poetry, and you would save it,
fold the paper up neat-like and tuck it
into your trunk of memories.
One sheet at a time, shift the book,
offer Chronicles to the canines.

In the corner, the second-hand winged
armchair beckons. Like all armchairs, it
beckons more than a bible, becoming
an opening, a line in the night, like
he is a waitress, no wait, she is a waitress
who held more Whitman in a coffee cup
than all the poetry teachers I ever knew .
He always drank too much coffee. The
dentist complained of untreatable stains.

What theme is this, of Mice and Men
and mouths that could eat a book as well
as tear it? Every day he was a strong
as an ox, power in those hands
like the rawhide strip the dog doesn’t
chew anymore; the dog would rather
chew the shoes and books and baby’s
toys for her own complicated reasons.

I am wondering, though, who tasted the
rawhide saddle to know that wine could
be the same?

Thunderstorms and Wine

Every day is like a thunderstorm,
part scary, part exciting, part energy, a
thread of lighting powering the tree to
splinters, and I a single thread,
a single thread that comes unstrung
so easily – one pull , all gone.

Caught between the cork and the screw,
he fumbles an opening line, lost between
escaping bubbles. I thought you were a
story I had to read all of the way to the
happy ending but who knows when that
epic will come to its close?

I am lost in wine metaphors, having never
been a drinker. I lay in the dark of your
blue room, alone on your blue bed, and
I played between my fingers one soft
blue thread. Can wine splinter? Can it get
under your skin, blush you red ’til you throb?

Ah, wine’s flavours simmer beneath the
surface, gathering tension, releasing more.
My husband is red wine, flowing through
my veins, turning me red with married
single-minded desire.

South Africa tells a story of broken
bottles and rich wines that all run
together like soft blue thread, red stories
and a blanket. Beneath the blue,
yellow paint peels and falls
as tears behind the smile.

You were not a glass of wine or even a
beer after a hard day. You were a straight
shot of hard liquor, chased down with
tequila.

Good Stories Always Begin in the Kitchen

All good stories always begin in the kitchen.
At least ours did, and it is a good story
midst good food. Who knew a kitchen story
would lead us here now? Three kids,
three jobs and a dog who chews Tolkien.
Far from the madding crowd, I tip the
Countryside, folding days into days.

You Weren’t Magic

Silly sixteen-year-old me
thought that you were magic. You
were not. The wizard poster
in your room was as close as
you got, wizards and punk rock,
rock lobsters and 80s
break dancing mobsters.

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May 122010

It always takes a few moments for participants in our poetry jams to collect themselves, eat the last of dinner, calm down, and generally settle themselves as they prepare to jam. Tuesday’s poetry jam was no different, except an errant camel named Bradley, having imbibed a certain volume of wine at dinner, wandered on to the scene.

A Cacophonous Choir Assembles

By @mdgoodyear, @llbarkat, @PoemsPrayers, @mxings, @togetherforgood, @cascheller, @mmerubies, @MonicaSharman, @DancinButterfly, @thegypsymama, @TchrEric and @KathleenOverby. Not to mention @shrinkingcamel. Edited by @glynn_poet.

Mi mi mi.
I hope others come to this
party besides
me me me.

Opera?

What is this 10-15 syllables?
That is just mean; when I catch
you I am going to strangle
you in my car.

But it was time to try some meter and
syllables are the easiest entry point to that!

He means structure, the man is
giving me structure, sounds like
work .

La Boheme?
Italy?
Spaghetti?
Can a poetry party have a
spaghetti theme?
Petrarch. Italy,
Italy! Is it Italy?

Tonight I get to just play.
Prompts brought to you by
mystery prompter.

Hello. What’s going on?
What am I doing here? A
glass of wine, please?
What’s up?
I’m here! Life can
begin now!

I’m ignoring her. Heh heh heh.
You are not allowed to ignore
me. Turn your gaze.
A glass of wine and thee,
Bradley.
(Like my rhyme?)

Well, I’m not to the rhyming
part yet. Warming up. Meee Mee.
Do la so fa me re..
Garcon! A round for everyone!
On the house!
A round of Guiness I hope!
Are we in France? I thought
this was Italy. Garcon?
Okay I will bring the chilled
Swill.
Swill my gaze, artfully take me
to Venice and beyond under the
sun, under the universal story.
I’ll just have coffee. I can be the
designated driver.

Coffee stories happen, like the
way him and her happened:
a swig, before
they could stop.
The old school shutter, clicks and
releases, staining cells with light.

Photography. Italy?
Italian photography?

Wish I was up for, but alas
the brain is
too fried for poetry friends.
We never let that stop us!
At least I don’t!

I am not slow! it’s my computer!
TweetDeck is responding more
quickly than the page.

Just had a nice glass of Sineann
Pinot Noir with din-din tonight.
Fine stuff, it is.
Hiccup!

Related:

Heather Truett, our own @mmerubies, collected and posted all of her tweets from last night’s jam under the title of “Ode to a Social Network.”

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May 052010

I consider breaking this into two posts but the last poems from Thursday’s poetry jam on Twitter turned out to be so short that I decided to keep all of them together. This concludes the poems that resulted from the jam.

The Songs of King Tut 4

By @llbarkat, @PoemsPrayers, @mmerubies, @KathleenOverby, @MonicaSharman, @togetherforgood, @mxings, @mdgoodyear, @mattpriur, and @PhoenixKarenee, edited by @gyoung9751

The Weariness of a King

When I am tired, I can feel the weary
world in my every hollow bone, lotus
white, fragile like a god made of morning
light. I want to emerge from this lotus
flower or filigreed fans of linear words.
My God emerged from the lotus flower
of a woman’s body, the words falling out
of his mouth, dripping off of his tongue.

What else would a king drive to parties
but this yellow Elise like 189 horses, each
with the power of four and twenty falcons
baked in a six pence song. What pie this is!
Falcons baked within like apples on Thanksgiving
Day. Pass the whipped cream and other dainty
dishes, finding verse in raisins and honey biscuits
sweet enough for the sun.

Because he could not write, I drove him to parties
on golden chariots of breath, of words. I feel some
days that I am not able to write myself. What
would have happened to me if I had been born
before women were allowed to use their words like
I do? How many poets did we miss? Their voices
were silenced. They wrote their poems in baking bread
and raising children.

Glass Mornings

Time for spit from tongue.
You cannot write yourself; leave that to
light touching you just so, showing your
contour through glass mornings.
Mornings have felt like glass, lately, as I
rise into the foggy fragility of another day.
I have missed my light-filled mornings, rivers
of glass decorated/honeyed with moon; now
the glass seems empty, only a few small drops left
but I will shake them free, reflecting back from
first glass of water, hydrating life back into the day
and words pour from once-parched throat.

He made excuses, and believed the “no time” lie.

Counterpoise

You are my counterpoise, the lotus to my poppy
the pepper to my raisined honey. I have no idea
where I am, or you are, yet I know you are here,
also trying to find your way. Prayers can whisper
through lotus nights or scream through red
poppy mornings; each finds its way.

She is often my field of Oz Poppies. She is a
safe open field where I can rest. True friendship
can be like this. if I could not write it all out, I
would be in the tomb, worn out from all that
roams through night and day. I would be honeyed
with moon over lotus, dripping with ambered love
before day breaks. Droplets fall
fall
fall
into the red curve of petal, capturing dew of the
night for the day.
The words of a poem are like ancient insects
trapped inside the amber glass: beta lotus, alpha
poppy, moon bark omega, equally dissected into
separate jars.
Tree limbs crash through glass windows, warning
of things to come.

Royal Daggers

Gold daggers pierce glass, emerge
honey- sheathed with carnelian-thick
life, trapping bones of royalty to
capture the stories.

Gold daggers reserved for royal few but
golden words all can wield mightier than
sword, gashing themselves hopkins style,
gold vermillion, royal sparks, divinity coals.

Royal daggers drawn unexpected slice the
life from poppy stem, simplicity against all
reason. Ah, there the counterpoise before
the dagger, stab quickly before the time passes.

If you are going to stab me, have the decency
to aim for my heart from the front, from my
face, and use a gold dagger. Always the sharp
edge. Always the game of the knife.

And the laughing cut, like the words of a
poem, intoxicate like poppy seeds, red petals
searing our hearts with promise of love, dead
words like glass-shattered chunks squared.

Drown me down, shoot me wet, never cut me
Laughing; gash gold, promise gold, laugh gold,
hold gold against all reason. In the garden insects
hum; dead words rise, reaching for heaven. Into
the golden glow into the bright star light,
the words now dull float into the night. The
breeze blew and quietly settled amongst the stars.

Yet how can words be dead? I do not think they ever
really die. I did not laugh when I cut you with
dagger-edged words; my knife-sharp tongue is
clumsy as my wit. I once tried to buy an ebony
breast-dagger in a market in a small city in Mexico.
I was 16 and had no breasts to hold that dagger.
Words were too fragile to contain the feeling of farewell.

The Color of Alabaster

I should know the color of alabaster.
White, is it not?
Anne Shirley always made me desire an alabaster
brow, alabaster and ebony,
Mix the two and you’ve got concrete grey.

The Court of King Tut Gives Feedback

So now, poetry aside, did the page work or
what tool did y’all use? More crashes, more
halting pauses, more nodes of net confused
by verse traffic? Let us know if you used the
game page. If so, how it went. If not, was it
because it seemed unwieldy, or what?

Promise warning please; unknown words swirl
slowly. May order never cease to amaze us. Yes,
the page worked. How often do you have these
poetry parties?
We have killed Tweetdeck with words of glass,
daggers of gold. Had half-minute delays on my
contributions at times, but the game page still
showed them eventually. I’m assuming others
also noted this.
Tweetdeck is definitely way faster, but then
you can miss people you may not be following.
Surely I am missing something here, while I wait;
it comes so slowly now — blink, it will be as if it
never was.

All hail the author of the beta tool
Hail man of lotus tea, iced, Egyptian sugared
pectoral beta muscled tool!

Farewell to Tut and Nefertiti

Fifty minutes plus ten
makes for a full
vase of night poetry.
An hour come and gone,
buried now with its
golden words and
alabaster phrases
because like Aguecheek
in his Twelfth Night,
we are lovers of beef
and cross garters.

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