Feb 062010

From poems about poems (“Meta-Poems”), last Tuesday’s poetry jam on Twitter took a turn toward love poems. Boy did it take a turn! Below are three, which I’ve entitled “Borrow My Life,” “Life Frail,” and “The Words in the Heavens.”

And there are more to come. It was one prolific poetry jam.

Love Poems 3

By @lorrie58, @memoriaarts, @togetherforgood, @mmerubies, @llbarkat, @poemsandprayers, @doallas, @KathleenOverby, @TchrEric, and @lauraboggess, with a slight contribution from @gyoung9751.

Borrow My Life

Borrow my life;
crush it between
your rough fingers;
secret weight of crushing hand
pushes it into words.
Last night, I dreamed of
secret weights
held back just barely from
crushing,
kept just slightly from rushing
to your arms.

Thighs carry secrets,
support their weight
below the heart and stomach,
holding up desire
above their flesh.
Ecstasy and sorrow float
alone.

Desire to couple can
sometimes make one single,
make one solitary,
even in that moment
when two come together,
Revealing words collected in net,
singing love song,
smelling blossoms
pressed in pages,
seeing the shimmer in the wind,
feeling the ecstasy.

Sifted word-sand,
Shifting word-sand,
drifting on soft breeze whisper.
Whisper when you tell me
no, Lord. Please
whisper when you tell me
no.

Life, Frail

Life, frail,
twist turns leaf upon love
twixt black and white.
Life, frail,
tosses words out,
as from a mouth in anger.
Regret later
finds its home.

Free they flow,
when you
are near,
words harrumphed and
rocky make for
pitching dreams.
Lumpy regret twists
mouth into fragile leaf.

Words won’t heal him. They
don’t help him. I am powerless
beside him. She keeps right on
hurting him. Words hurt him, so
why, if words can hurt so
hard so bad so true,
why can’t they
save him too?

Give me your words.
Mine are finished.
I laid them all out
there for her to see and
she still left me. Her
stone-words
lie in my heart
as a weight unbearable.

The Words in the Heavens

Borrow a couple of
words, a single word, even
I will take it, frail
light as lips brushing
moonlight. Find words in
the face of the moon, on
tips of stars,
within the heavens deep.

Along the Milky Way,
words light up the sky,
bend toward Venus,
looking for Mars.
I do not feel
the burden of the words,
only the lightness
of their afterglow.

Whisper moonlight on
hard words,
lift lightly to
heal.
Venus, love,
Mars, war.
What words do they
share, so different?

Polished ruby red and cut
prettier than white diamond,
bloodier than who
you think I am.
Mars be the challenge;
Venus has words to spare
for love.
I feed them moondust.

Dip your words in
the well of Venus.
Lift them silver in the
dripping afterglow.
Thighs ache,
love rests.
The room is dark and
peace descends.

Perelandra sings as
Venus dips low,
collision of it all made flesh
Perelandra,
where God could start again
with a new Eve,
a day with no
mistakes.

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10 Comments to “Love Poems 3”

  1. I shivered reading these. These are a double WOW.

    The tweeting is so much fun. After, seeing what you do with our individual series of tweets, is undeniable pleasure.

  2. Bridget says:

    Wow… beautiful and powerful!

  3. Kathleen says:

    This brought tears and I don’t even know why. Understanding will come later?
    I hesitate to add these lyrics, but they go with it perfectly. Spirit inspired editing my friend. Intimacy of the soul. What a gift to all of us. Thank you.

    Crushing Hand

    from the album “Nazarene Crying Towel”

    (Words and Music by Terry Taylor)

    Thy will move me
    Thy will use me
    You lay Your crushing hand
    Your mighty hand
    On me gently

    You know my name
    Wound me
    You know my frame
    Heal me
    You lay Your crushing hand
    Your mighty hand
    On me gently

    Do what You must and save me
    I’m in the dust now raise me
    Lord I believe
    Help my unbelief
    Go gently

    Holy God break me
    Holy Lord take me
    Lay your crushing hand
    Your mighty hand
    On me gently
    Your crushing hand
    Your mighty hand
    On me gently

  4. william says:

    well folks you ALL did a fantastic job here, superb poems, well done, loved reading them :)

  5. Heather says:

    WOW! Thank you for putting all of this together. These turned out amazing.

  6. L.L. Barkat says:

    this made me just about weep… “Please
    whisper when you tell me
    no.”

  7. Love Poems 3 says:

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  8. laura says:

    All this talk of aching thighs carrying secrets? Whew, is it hot in here? So sensuous. We’re pretty smoking for a bunch of Jesus Freaks.

    Beautiful work, Glynn, as usual!

  9. L.L. Barkat says:

    Laura, hilarious.

    Well, I do believe Jesus was there in Song of Songs. :)

  10. laura says:

    Yes! He is the author of passion.

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